| "Hitchin' Bit" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: Story Helpers
Reviewed By: Rater On: June 10, 2005 09:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think bit should tell about his past and have lenna come in comfort and maybe hitch bit up with leena.
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Reviewed By: Cluck the Chickin On: November 26, 2004 03:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! Please continue! It wasn't boring (like some I have read)!
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Title: Do ever so continue please
Reviewed By: Zoid [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this like a year ago i think. But i read it again today, it is really a great story. You must continue. Write more chapters. It is your...destiny!
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Reviewed By: midnight lotus [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 15:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
You better continue it! I want to hear about his past...and about M.J. There's a billion ways you could go with this. There was a problem in your fic about the bolded text near the end. It was sort of distracting.
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Reviewed By: pink panther On: April 24, 2004 14:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
i really liked it please continue! i would really like this one as a chapter fic so you can explain his past.
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Reviewed By: Zoid [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 17:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked your...fiction. Ya've talent kid. please do continue. Sincerely, Mr. Harshaw. Dunt screw with my corporate mafia. really don't.
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Title: goodness
Reviewed By: Ariel from the sea On: April 06, 2004 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You rock, please continue.
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Reviewed By: Kc and jojo On: April 06, 2004 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looooooooooooove it.
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Reviewed By: ranma fan On: April 06, 2004 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic please continue. cuz i absolutely love it.
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Reviewed By: Moonmanmorr On: April 01, 2004 23:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really enjoyed your story and thought it was well written and stuctured. I hope you decide to continue your story.
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Title: ^_^;;
Reviewed By: Amanda a.k.a. Kazk [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed it, but I hate the fact you are even thinking of leaving it like that. I would love it if you would continue. This is a great start to a probably great story. ~Amanda a.k.a. Kazk
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