| "Can you give me a reasone to live" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: EnV [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well..i hope u get it fixed or upload it sumwhere eles...=]
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: Sexi3_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was tight, there isn't going to be lemons soon are there??
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Reviewed By: Kage Hogosha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 11:16 CST
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO... IT'S A READERS WORST NIGHTMARE*start crying* *sniffle* i will continue to read your fic and i say this in place of all the faithful readers "WE WILL MISS YOU!!!!"
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Reviewed By: Ookami92(not signed in) On: March 24, 2005 12:40 CST
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NOO! that sux! but it happened to me once^^ so I understand ur problem. I'll be patient with u. I hope you get ur files typed up soon I love this fic!
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Reviewed By: TheStatue On: March 19, 2005 21:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
[blink] that sucks. I think I'd flip if I didn't check my email once every few hours! [shrug] but I did grow up in Silicon Valley. Luck with rescuing your work... maybe you could spell check it when you do so? This has so much potential.
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Reviewed By: TheStatue On: March 18, 2005 02:24 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
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Not a bad story... if it weren't for the typos that made it almost unreadable. Please, spell-check! and then re-post so it can be read without giving me a headache. I couldn't get past the first few chapters.
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Reviewed By: Kage Hogosha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 14:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOO!!! don't make a lemon with boton/Kurama/ i enjoying this fic alot
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 18:29 CST
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Yes I would love for you to write a Kurama/Botan lemon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope you wite a Hiei/Kagome lemon ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: YES
Reviewed By: Hiei fan^^ On: February 10, 2005 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES I WANT A LEMON BETWEEN BOTAN AND KURAMA!! I Wanna see what happens. and Does Youko come out!?Youko is kewl^^Please Update ASAP!!!!
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Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 04:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
'Tis not a bad story, but I simply couldn't read much of it without getting incredibly frustrated at the profusion of typos, and closing the window. Please, Spell check! It'll do wonders.
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Reviewed By: Forbidden Female Flare (2 lazy 2 log in) On: February 03, 2005 17:30 CST
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Grrrrrrr... why did you hav ta end it!!! Dont move the fic too fast and not to slow. And try to keep the peeps in character. Oh and there's a thing called Microsoft Word and spell check!!!!! Well Im still enjoying the fic and cant wait to read the next chappie!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: tessie On: February 02, 2005 00:37 CST
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great chappie, can't wait for an update. i love this story!
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Title: SWEET!!!
Reviewed By: fanof3eyedhiei92 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 10:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the whole thing so PLEASE update but kagoma as a PUNK O.O!!!! that is strange but kool. and is keiko dead I didn't understand that one part. So PLEASE update ASAP!!!!
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Title: Nice fic
Reviewed By: Thundercat 2 lazy 2 sign in On: January 28, 2005 15:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a good fic here. I'm not the world's best spelling B champ but I noticed you miss spelled some words. Sure = You spelled it like suer. Great= You spelled it like grate. Great means grand. Grate means metal/plastic covers with holes. Kinda like the ones on Air/heat vents and water drains.
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Title: Can You Give Me A Reason To Live
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 22:21 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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