| "Can you give me a reasone to live" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Title: YES
Reviewed By: Hiei fan^^ On: February 10, 2005 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES I WANT A LEMON BETWEEN BOTAN AND KURAMA!! I Wanna see what happens. and Does Youko come out!?Youko is kewl^^Please Update ASAP!!!!
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Reviewed By: Shabopo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 04:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
'Tis not a bad story, but I simply couldn't read much of it without getting incredibly frustrated at the profusion of typos, and closing the window. Please, Spell check! It'll do wonders.
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Reviewed By: Forbidden Female Flare (2 lazy 2 log in) On: February 03, 2005 17:30 CST
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Grrrrrrr... why did you hav ta end it!!! Dont move the fic too fast and not to slow. And try to keep the peeps in character. Oh and there's a thing called Microsoft Word and spell check!!!!! Well Im still enjoying the fic and cant wait to read the next chappie!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: tessie On: February 02, 2005 00:37 CST
Comment/Review:
great chappie, can't wait for an update. i love this story!
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Title: SWEET!!!
Reviewed By: fanof3eyedhiei92 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 10:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the whole thing so PLEASE update but kagoma as a PUNK O.O!!!! that is strange but kool. and is keiko dead I didn't understand that one part. So PLEASE update ASAP!!!!
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Title: Nice fic
Reviewed By: Thundercat 2 lazy 2 sign in On: January 28, 2005 15:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a good fic here. I'm not the world's best spelling B champ but I noticed you miss spelled some words. Sure = You spelled it like suer. Great= You spelled it like grate. Great means grand. Grate means metal/plastic covers with holes. Kinda like the ones on Air/heat vents and water drains.
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Title: Can You Give Me A Reason To Live
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 22:21 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 13:09 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG I love this story it's great you have got to update it really soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 20:42 CST
Comment/Review:
I like it alot!!!! Please update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: aru-kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2004 18:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you must update soon!!! please update soon!! if you don't i'll just have to annoy you threw reviews til you do!!!
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Title: WHHYYYY?????
Reviewed By: aru-kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whhhhyyyy????? why did you end it right there? it was just getting really good!!!!! you really need to update soooooon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 18:37 CST
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UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUPPPPDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTT TTTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! OK you get the point and if you can't read it read update ok ok. ^_______________________________________________^
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Reviewed By: Kage Hogosha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 10:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
three words... YOU ARE EVIL!!! please update soon. i really like this fic. (^_~)
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Reviewed By: Forbidden Female Flare (2 lazy 2 log in) On: December 11, 2004 23:56 CST
Comment/Review:
yo its a good story but chap 11 seems to be screwed are sumtin. I beleavie(sp) when you revesed(sp) ch 1 it got messed up 2. You might want 2 check on that.
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Reviewed By: ZTolerance06 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 21:58 CST
Comment/Review:
you story in all is very good
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