| "Sakaki pets a cat" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: DB Sommer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 11:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice intention behind the fic. It was a bit disjointed, but you're young, and still honing your writing skills. Considering your age, it's a nice work.
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Title: my mediaminer member name is a-Leng
Reviewed By: Leng [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 03:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Unfortunately, in my opinion I think this story is insufficient in length. The idea is good and very nice but there was a lack in detail and emotion. Nevertheless, it's nice to see a non-hentai Azumanga Daioh fic.
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Title: Sakaki pets a cat
Reviewed By: mandisakuri On: April 09, 2004 15:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!
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Title: Sakaki Pets A Cat
Reviewed By: sakuraali On: April 08, 2004 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
even though some of the grammar in your story wasn't great, the story was fast-paced and good.
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