| "DiD v. tKiSA" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ] |
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Title: Ch 19
Reviewed By: justkat-atonic from laughing too much On: September 02, 2004 04:21 CDT
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Hn. If Duo was here he could explain that that means Top stuff Muffie...keep it up!, but seeing as he isn't I'll just have to revert to an obscure pre-colony dialect from the free online foreign language dictionaries on the palm top Q gave Trowa for Christmas, and go for Totally awesome writage dude!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 16:00 CDT
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'poured his insta-boil water ...' Oi they make instant everything nowadays huh?! *snickers* "Chang told me that my cute butt was immaterial." ... I could sooo see Heero pouting, he's so kawaii... *big smile* Oh i'm so glad you included the bit that Duo is the only one who understand Heero's one-syllable 'Hn' answers aka Heero-ese lol! Man and you ended the chapter with him smiling OOO that was good. but hmm have to wonder or ponder about what duo said, that Heero should've got him before... and that they stuck him... so maybe they implanted the womb?! lol well we'll see how Duo behaves when he wakes, that's if he remembers! Thank you for the update!!! more please!!
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 15:12 CDT
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Multi-lingual-Trowa, mmuuahahaa, great!!! And was that a little hint at those AU-fics? giggle Trowa-pirat, bedslave, lol. I guess I already mentioned that I admire how you make fun of fangirl-cliche-fics enough. I should mention too, that I absolutly like the way you turn those cliche into something new and mix it with your own stile. I love this fic. One of the best humor-fics I've read in a long while.
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Reviewed By: Clairice-Sarah [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to update. I want you to ........... no, I NEED you to UPDATE!!! PLEASE THIS IS LIKE ONE OF THE BEST YAOI'S I'VE EVER READ PLEASE UPDATE BEFORE I CRY!!! "I am the fucking princess goddamnit don't make me pull out the fucking tiara to prove it!"
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Reviewed By: priscel- --notsignedin-- - On: August 27, 2004 08:36 CDT
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oh my gosh..."..Perhaps "love as appropriate for whatever mission is current"..." cracking up ROFL!!!!!!"... 'Locked in forbidden, taboo love'... She clasped her hands together and held them to her chest. 'The love that dare not speak its name; the love that flies in the face of every socially acceptable custom there is; the love that must stand in the face of derision.' She looked around, then hissed, 'Heterosexual love.'" I love it! A complete inverse of the taboo, and boy Heero and Duo at the end of this chapter *cough* Hot is not the best word to describe it but that's word that's available in my vocab at the moment. And Poor heero just about to devirginize his Baka, and himself in a sense, when Wuffers comes in and spoils it *pouts, then glomps Muffie-sama* thank you for the update! more please! ...
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 12:05 CDT
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Another cliche, grins, the "meeting a lost member from the streetgang who happens to be Duo's betrothed" and the "sixth pilot is a girl" cliche.. haven't thought of them. You did a good research for this fic. I'm in awe!!! lol Oh, Safer Sex with Wufei... because you won't get any.... lol. Poor Heero.
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Title: Ch 18
Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 02:25 CDT
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Injuuustiiiissss!!! Now I know why they're always shoving Wufei into Preventors...he just has a natural nack for prevention. Left with our tongues hanging out, tongue tied and salivating for more...and that's just Heero! Luckily it's all tongue in cheek...^^ And now...a tongue twister...Prevalent penetration prevention particularly painful pertaining perpetrator perpendicular protrusion predicament. Prolonged postponement possibly producing proportional permanent parallel positioning. In other words...Poor Heero!!!
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Reviewed By: Alea On: August 14, 2004 19:02 CDT
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:) *grin* i cant wait for the next chap to come out :3 its sow funny ^_^"are we having sex now?" lol XD
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Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 21:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Show me how rimming feels," Heero ordered. Thirty minutes later.... "He doesn't have a concussion," Heero decided, checking the bump on Wufei's head once again. *snort* It took some fast grunting and a Glare o Death set to kill, but he managed to convince Quatre *guffaw* And Quatre reacing to Heero complaining that Trowa would not demonatrate oral sex! On the floor. Have I told you how much I worship you?
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 02:52 CDT
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I love it when Heero talks "matter of fact-stile" like in the book shop when he told Trowa just why he thought that you need three men to have gay sex... lol. OH, and the Duo is a girl-cliche seems to be the running gag throughout the story, right? hihihi, the poor teacher, getting beat with boxers. Aaaaaahhh, finally, some sexual experience for Heero, I was wondering how long you would let him suffer.
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Title: ch 17
Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yayyy!!! Fireworks and Vernier engines!!! Perfectly perfect. But I think that the thermostat is definitely broken. Here anyway. I was laughing so much I fell on it. I would like to list the myriad things that I enjoyed about this chapter but I only have 1253 characters left. And besides, I can't stop thinking about paper clips. I shall just go away now, and die and go to heaven, loudly singing your praises with the Choir Invisibool. Thanks heaps Muffie.^^
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Reviewed By: priscel *wipes her eyes* On: August 07, 2004 17:38 CDT
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MAN!! I'm cracking upover here...from Heero " ... [pulling] on three pairs of sexy girl's " to Duo's nick name of Forelock for tro I'm still gigglin with a bit of blush from the lemony goodness at the end *snickers when thinking about mental deversion to cave man grunt of goodness and instinctual need to insert where?* lol *blinks back tears*
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Reviewed By: Alea On: August 05, 2004 16:40 CDT
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*snicker* again a verry funny chap :) i luft it ^.^ and indeed Trowa is a perv but i think its funny actually @_@
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Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 05:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
STarted reading your fic today and couldn't stop until the last chapter. It is brilliant. Your stile is absolutly perfect. When you start writing all those fluffy, sappy things that happen in fairytales and then you stated that these things didn't happen because of obvious reasons.. lol. And all those referancies to other Gundam Fanfiction like the scene in the Dungeon with Duo telling Wufei that Heero and he are in love with him.... great!!! Or at that time of selfreflection when Relena and Quatre where crying about the injustice of being written all stereotypical.... And when Duo left Peacemillion and Heero followed him and held his: You make the perfect soldier feel alive-speech... and then that mollesting at the school and Heero threatening the boy to be back the next day to mollest him...... I have the feeling that you like to make fun of any and every fanfiction cliche every other "fangirl" (mmuuhahahaaa) has ever written? Am I right? giggle Insanely good Idea. Oh, and was that a reverance to "spaceballs"? "I didn't see you playing with your dragon???? YES!!!!! What else have you planned? rofl Enjoyment Factor 100%
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Reviewed By: priscel *hmm* On: August 04, 2004 23:58 CDT
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\contribution/response to pyzrm and justkat comments\ I think Trowa being the Perv is strangly suiting *snickers* he's the quiet one until he's threaten that he can't have nookie from his pookie and spills words like a fount! But ya know I think it has something to do with that old saying about quiet, shy types (^_^)
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