| "The Light Within the Shadows" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: kinda sad don't ya think
Reviewed By: Maykiyma436 On: March 13, 2005 20:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was a little short, and how do you plan to make a sequel if Riku is dead?
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Reviewed By: Every Heart (not Logged in) On: February 15, 2005 11:52 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Must do a sequal!!!! I HATE SPELLING.....forgive me since I can't spell. But ya gotta do a sequal! I wanna read it too! ^^ the story is awesome!
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Reviewed By: one_winged_angel On: October 10, 2004 19:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
over all very nice...angsty but nice, but who was the boy and why did maleficent have him killed. if its not to much trouble do pleasee right a sequel, any who it was good. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Ominee On: May 18, 2004 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story please make a sequal with lots of chapters. If you make a sequal I betcha I will read it.
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