| "Please Remember Me" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Yasu-san [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you have anymore to write about please write it! I really liked this fic. It made me cry at some points and when a fic does that it's usually very good! Great job and Stay Happy!
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Reviewed By: bladeofakira On: September 18, 2005 12:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
such a sad chapter, sad yet well written. i hope to see more great chapters in the next little while!!
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Reviewed By: blessed_love15 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 11:45 CDT
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So in the end, half of the characters die. Thanx for telling us why Tohru killed herself. She was brutally raped by 4 men, that's a plausable reason... I guess. *exsasperated sigh* and you say you aren't morbid. I'm a bit depressed now, that was a sad story.
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Title: o_O
Reviewed By: blessed_love15 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 11:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmm.... where should I start? First off, I love the idea. Tohru has had enough and takes the cowards way out, a very non-Tohru-ish thing to do. On the other hand, everybody is way out of character. What about Tohru's promise to her mother? And why did Hana-chan and Uo-chan abandon her? With those questions answered then may be this whole thing would make a lot more sense. If you wanted Tohru to commit suicide, then you could've built some kind of reason or list of events. She'd do anything to protect the Sohmas from Akito's rath-- even stay alive. Yuki wouldn't call her "Tohru-chan" either, unless they became lovers somehow. It all seemed very unnatural and disconnected, especially when the characters talked. Sure, they're saying all the things that lovers would say, but are they feeling it? You have some great ideas, so don't rush through them. Something this random needs to grow in a story, then your readers can get accustom to the idea. All in all, this was... confusing.
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Reviewed By: Kitsuki On: February 16, 2005 16:38 CST
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Oh man, this is intense! You've really captured the hell those around her are going through. Suicide is so FUCKING STUPID! I get angry and devistated everytime I think about it. This fic definately made me cry, cry and then cry some more. I hope for updates soon!
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Title: cute
Reviewed By: angelofmusic On: January 18, 2005 01:31 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its so cute but really really sad cant wait untill update!!
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Reviewed By: Acire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 18:10 CST
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*tears* Wow. I havent read a fic this good for weeks now! well, if ur gonna continue plz do it soon! oh, and if you get a chance read a couple of my ficcies... their both Fruits basket, one is called somethings change and others dont *yea its a corny title but its the only one i could come up with ^_^'* and the other one is..... umm... blast it all! I cant even remember the title of my own fics! Its umm j... Jury! thats it jury. well that one is more of a crossover but w/e... and I have 2 others but i could care less if ppl read em so eh *shrugz* NEWAYZ that was a bloody brilliant story ya made there! keep it up! ^_~
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: KittyPerson On: November 30, 2004 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was sad, but suicide gets you to hell though, so Tohru won't be with her mom ;_; Bold
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Reviewed By: Akira139 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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I loved it, though placing tohru's death in her point of view makes you feel her pain. it made me cry, reading her death. I hope to see more soon
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Reviewed By: Raberba girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 12:09 CDT
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It's a really good death fic, but you never really explained _why_ Tohru decided to kill herself. Maybe you could add a chapter that details the events leading up to chapter 1.
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Reviewed By: Meandering [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 20:32 CDT
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Hm, I really hate angsty stories, but yours was one of the best, I should think. I barely dared to read it through.
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Reviewed By: elleven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*wipes away tears* this is so sweet! i have actually imagined toruh being depperessed, this is so wonderfully writen!
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Reviewed By: Shikon Jewel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 14:02 CDT
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Two things: I love this story...and 2nd, what does koishii mean? Sry, I just don't know many Japanese terms...
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Reviewed By: Di On: April 18, 2004 16:45 CDT
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humm... Interesting and engaging beginning. You should try to describe the setting more. Otherwise, good beginning. I can't wait to read more.
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Title: What happens next?
Reviewed By: fluffysprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 03:44 CDT
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That's a good chapter! I know you said you were writing others as well, but do you plan on continuing this one? I'm a recent fan to FB, so I haven't decided who I want Tohru-chan to end up with, and who she really ends up with, if anyone! I hope you write more! Sara-sama
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