| "The Forgotten Primarch of Chaos" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Mase On: July 05, 2005 13:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the Fanfic, exspecially the moment, when Ranma, protected by the talisman, walked calmly with the SpaceMarines and was unaffected by the BolterFire in Chapter 19. I think, the Emperor wouldnt havve had problem with a single Demon, even if it would have been a Greater One. He stood up against the combined Forces of Chaos during the Heresy and was virtorious! So Ranma should also be more powerful. Think about it. The psychic powers of the Emperor are by far bigger than the ones of any Chaos God. He IS the material form of the StarChild, the good ChaosGod, feeding of the good emotions of the universe. Sorry for my english, its only my second language. geetings, mase
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Title: yaa
Reviewed By: hisakata On: May 29, 2005 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yaaa!! new ch all hail montymouse
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Reviewed By: Lady Megani15 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 13:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very very descriptive! Characters are somewhat familiar to me. Very good use of words and grammar. The series, Oh My Goddess! is a wonderful series when you find yourself bored, sad or even happy. there is a lot of humour in these kind of series, but i sort of don't the humour between the characters.
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Reviewed By: Gopu On: November 18, 2004 01:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Great story
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Reviewed By: Dark Topaz [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 07:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story please update soon
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Reviewed By: Lady Sei On: March 31, 2004 13:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more!! I'm completely clueless about Warhammer 40k, but your story is easy to follow anyway. I've been hooked since chapter one! This is one of the rarest gems of fanfiction: a well-written crossover. I'm eager to see how things turn out.
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Reviewed By: DarkRetribution On: March 27, 2004 05:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like 40k what can I say it is a very origional fic PS it was Sanguinus who killed the blood thirster in toe to toe. He snapped its back on his knee
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