| "SCREAM!!!!!!!" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Brie is thanking you later
Reviewed By: brie On: February 08, 2007 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brie is thanking you later!! Thanks lor I was reading this story and I realized that it would have been so much better if i would use some sentence structure and if I wasn't so lazy and would come over to your house and fix and maybe finish it! LOL anyway thanks for updating it and if you want to finish it tell me and i'll try and work something out and come over finally or if you just want to delete it thats cool too! Well g2g lylas ttyl.
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Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 19:21 CST
Comment/Review:
^^; no offense brie, but lor is better off handling this fic by herself. but you could always help for inspiration! ^~ bring in Veggie! X3 byes
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Reviewed By: Brie On: October 04, 2004 15:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Brie- OKAY OKAY I'M HERE LEAVE ME ALONE YOU CAN WORK ON IT WITHOUT ME YOU KNOW!!! sigh Lor- you don't have to yell ;_; Brie- I'm sorry I love you ^_^ Lor- -_- ......... suck up Brie- You say that like its a bad thing.
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Queen Breeza [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good fanfic. Sentence structure could use some work, but overall, I enjoyed reading it. Keep going! XD
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Reviewed By: DragoneyesBC [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 15:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lor- Haha now Brie needs to get her butt to my house so we can resume lol. I thought this was going to be better but I think it will if BRIE COMES OVER!! ~trying to grab the attention of the girl in her house across the street.~
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