| "The new Comers" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 16:05 CDT
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PLEASE REVIEW!!!! *I want/need reviews!!!*
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 01:36 CDT
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 01:32 CDT
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i love the sequel! yay courtney! like i have said before i am just goin around and reviewing for the hell of it. ^_^ but hey, what ever makes you smile, ne? ja!
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 19:06 CDT
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 15:46 CST
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Title: sequel !!!!!!
Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 15:25 CST
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i think you should write a sequel . are their kids sailor people? bla bla bla i cant think of anything else to write...anywho i loved it!
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Title: the new comers
Reviewed By: deity of death 69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 22:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The new comers or should i say the new CUMMERS?! what a nasty,but great ff hey this is your deityofdeath69 speaking ,wassup?, n e ways courtney whats been new? opps i shouldent of said your name huh>?,n e ways i love the fic and the hentai not lemon hentai!!! chappys so ill see ya l8er and bye murriah!!!
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Title: O.o
Reviewed By: Hakumei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 19:30 CST
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...ok i really should read the warning lables on these things....-is glaring at her friend cat-...baka...she sent me the the 2nd chap...and of course being oblivious to everything i just started reading it..not even noticing that it was chap 2...yes i am a freak...and now that ive continued reading...im...well...O.o..no one told me this was Hentai...O.o...ok thats my little story....and the only reason im telling u all this is cuz....well....im bored out of my wits and...yeah thats about it...
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Title: im not trying to flame ya...just some constructive critisim
Reviewed By: Hakumei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 19:10 CST
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...O.o i liked it and all, but it was kinda confusing..its like what sessoustruluv said, this is just constructive critisim. Its all in one big line, no paragraphs, and the grammer..you dont want to get me started on grammer...but its a good idea, work on it.
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Reviewed By: Lady_Fate [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 13:12 CST
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i like this fic, but it's hard to tell who is talking and if it's in thought or not
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarustruluv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 01:08 CST
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I think I would like this fic very much, but I can't read it. It's all a giant line with no paragraphs. I'm not trying to flame ya here, just handing out a little constructive criticism.
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Title: lmao
Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 21:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lmao, i like it! keep on writing!
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