| "Stille Nacht" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Xellas [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 00:18 CDT
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Damn, this was good. I loved the characterization, the way you took such care to describe their feelings and reactions. I have a huge weakness for an aggressive-bottom Ran and you portrayed him to perfection. Youji was also incredibly well done, I particularly liked how convinced he was that he would be thrown out in the morning. Thanks for the great read!
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Title: *purrs*
Reviewed By: moonraven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 19:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, yeah baby! Love the vulnerable Youji...his insecurities are really, really cute. And the possessive Ran...*purrs some more* I LOVE a seme Ran...*sigh* ... ... Now on to the next chapter, young lady!
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Title: Tee hee...
Reviewed By: moonraven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 19:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An aggressive bottom. I like that! *leers* And their wordless communication...so fitting of the title, no da! Hmmm...come to think of it...the lemon is MUCH better than the tension, ne? *LOL* *hugs*
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Title: Steamy, no da
Reviewed By: Moonraven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My...*fans self* The sexual tension, na no da! I really, really like that. It's almost as good as the actual lemon. ^_^ . And Ran's "So, fuck me, then."... *Biggest grin* Yeah, Youji... do your stuff, ne? . Sorry this took so long. ^^;:
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Reviewed By: Sky Rat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 19:36 CST
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Heh, I wonder if Ken and Omi will get suspicious when they see that over the course of the night Aya and Yohji suddenly have matching cuts on their lips, hehe.
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Reviewed By: SomaliChan On: March 29, 2004 08:02 CST
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Oh man! I was so hoping for more of this. Hmm.....maybe you want to start an arc? *grins* Hmmm.....no confessions of love ne? They definitely care deeply for each other. The whole communicating with each other with no words thingy is just so cool~ Hehe Aya is really quite a oushy bottom ne? The part where Aya chose to hug Yohji tighter and stay in bed was quite surprising given your protrayal of Aya. Saw your works at Mediaminer. There was only one GW fic stated. Do you have more at other webby?
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Reviewed By: SomaliChan On: March 26, 2004 09:40 CST
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Just read chapter three at AFF. Wow~ Yes it is a better place to stop. Can't believe that this is your first attempt at fanfic. *shakes head disbelievingly* Well Aya will definitely make Yohji work at developing a closer realtionship with him. Heh......this means more chapters for readers like me! Muahahahah! But truly, your Aya seems to be one that feels that he doesn't deserve any happiness while his sister is in this coma. I don't think that a confession of love from Yohji will suddenly reverse his deep seated belief *evil grins* So more chapters to develop the plot?
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Reviewed By: SomaliChan On: March 25, 2004 20:30 CST
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Hot hot hot! Is it hot in here or is it just me? *looks around* Woah~ The chemistry between them is just simply amazing *drools* Heh, this pwp is developing a plot? Does that mean more chapters? *puppy eyes*
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Reviewed By: SomaliChan On: March 25, 2004 02:41 CST
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You are evil! Wait, you know that already. Still......argh! Love the built up so far. Hmmm......possessive Yohji and Aya are just so adorable! *glomps* Just one thing that keeps on hanging at the back of my mind. What's going to happen after this one night?
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