| "Fly on Broken Wings" Reviews/Comments [ 93 ] |
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 09:31 CDT
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oi!! what happen when they took Duo away *sniffles* NO worries about formatting I enjoy the story nonetheless! can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Empyreal [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 01:10 CDT
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Eee I'm so psyched everytime you update this! And Trowa was in this chapter, which is even more exciting! I love how you capture the complexity of the characters, even if they aren't really saying anything. Like Duo's fingers on the easel, and Trowa's eyes as he watches the others. Relena provides wonderful comic relief and I can't wait to see how much she goes berserk in future chapters over inprecise things. But first, we must see what happened with Duo! And hopefully lots more Trowa. Can't wait til the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 16:54 CDT
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Great to see this on MM. I hope you have a happy ending planned (somehow) for the boys.
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Title: Fly On Broken Wings
Reviewed By: SnakeMistress On: September 11, 2004 12:08 CDT
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this is great. i really can't wait for the next chapter. i hope you up date soon. and i'm trying as much as i can to be a patient waiter for Heero BUTS IT GETS HARD!! 8cries* he's my FAV character out of ALL of the GW pilots.so you can see this bit of dillema to my patience. please up date as soon as possible
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Reviewed By: animeotaku418(not signed in) On: September 08, 2004 19:35 CDT
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yo that was a good chapter!! ^^ but i really dont see whats wrong with duo....i know a bi polar. they dont have to be hospitalized....
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Reviewed By: hcbenitez [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 23:41 CDT
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update soon... this is a great fic. keep safe.
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Reviewed By: Wolf Riku On: September 07, 2004 18:36 CDT
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I waited a long time for this fic to be updated. Please add Heero soon. I admit I like it but I'm getting restless of waiting. Keep writing. Smell ya' later Wolf Riku
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Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 15:26 CDT
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So glad to see you continue with this. It's really engaging and different!
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Title: Fly on Broken Wings
Reviewed By: Alexandra06 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 15:21 CDT
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Hey I love your story don't give it up. I'm sure you won't leave Heero out, you can't really he's a cool guys *winks* lol. Anyways its all right to have long updates, though I'd love short ones, so long as you keep writing and don't leave me hanging here without an ending. How does the whole Wufei-Meiran-Trieze thing work? Do they know and talk to each other or do they vaguely know about each other, only through the journals? I'm kind of confused on that part but still loven it. What does Trowa talk to Cat but no one else not even his sister? I really love your story though so don't give up on it. I like how you got the doctors but are you going to have Une be a bitch or not? I'm loven your take on Duo. All work and no play make for a very dull day lol. Anyways I've probably wasted enough of your time lol. Ja.
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Reviewed By: Empyreal [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 15:10 CDT
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Oh man, I'm so excited you updated!! I was fearing that you'd given up on the fic or forgotten it or something! I really liked this chapter... especially the introduction of Treize. Oh but if he had more time with Quatre! What oh what would happen? And I mourn the absence of Trowa in this chapter (he's my fav). Hopefully lots more of him in the future? Duo's mood swings are fun, they give him much more depth and I like it. Can't wait til the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 06:31 CDT
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*glomps V. Nyte* thank you for the update and the reassurance regarding Heero's absence! man, i wonder what Quat's thoughts are after Duo revealed the truth about the doctors at that hospital? I knew that they were all bastards, this only confirmed my thoughts! This really leaves it all up to Quat and his new friends to make him better, that's if he wants to get better?! I saw the improvement in Quat countenance, he didn't cringe or whimper when duo spoke harshly in anger not directed at him, he didn't shut himself away. GO QUAT! Eventhough his voice was small, hollow/lacking a defined emotion Quat spoke and didn't cower! Again I apologize about the long review at the other site, I'm not sure if its posted yet, if not *looks sheepish* you'll know it when you see it. take care! And the update is well worth the wait.
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Reviewed By: LadyJessy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 11:44 CDT
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Well, i'm liking this fic well enough, even though not alot has happened yet. I hope you will continue it soon. I'll be waiting for an update! :)
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Reviewed By: Rune Essence [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love your story! ^_^ i'm really enjoying it and i hope you update soon, this fanfic is definitely something different. i love the way the G-boys are set up to, makes the story even more enjoyable. i can't wait untill Quatre and Trowa get together, their such an adorable couple! (I'm a huge 1x2 fan too) and i also can't wait untill Heero comes (I wonder what his "problem" is?) so keep up the good work and dont forget to update!
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Reviewed By: Empyreal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 05:58 CDT
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OKay I just have to review again now that I'm up to date with all your chapters. This fic is just absolutely amazing. It's an incredibly original idea, and I love the characterisations. You write wonderfully, and I couldn't stop reading until i could go no further, at which point I began whining that you'll hopefully update soon. you will, right? Anyway, awesome fic!
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Reviewed By: Empyreal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 05:03 CDT
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I'm really enjoying this fic. It's very humorous at times and catches their personalities well.
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