| "Fly on Broken Wings" Reviews/Comments [ 93 ] |
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Reviewed By: pixy stixs On: June 09, 2004 02:22 CDT
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*holds up an "UPDATE" banner* Peez?
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Zharaya [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so awesome! I really love the interaction between Duo and Quatre. And I'm definitely looking forward to learning more about Wufei, Treize and Meiran. Like why Quatre shouldn't let himself be alone with Treize. More please!!!
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Reviewed By: animeotaku418 (not signed in) On: May 05, 2004 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey that was a funny chapter! ^^ i LOVED duos dream! belive it or not, i've actually had one similar to that....except that it was an acid-spitting lizard, not a terrorist squirrel....hehehehe im a little weird. hey i appreaciate the info on what a sociopath is! i feel smart now. anyways, update soon and happy early birthday and have a good time at prom! ^^ toodles!
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Reviewed By: pixy stixs On: May 03, 2004 02:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Duo is friggin hilarous. But when will Heero be making an apperance? Or does he? The whole story is absolutely great. Nicely written and plotty. And great job on character development. (I love how there's like a hidden mystery to each of them.)What I would believe to be an accurate describition of what it's really like in a mental ward enviroment. Not to mention the Quatre/Trowa kawaii factor! Hope to see some Duo/Heero in the future. But keep up the good work. Can not wait to see the next chapter! Ja ne!
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Title: Fly on Broken Wings
Reviewed By: Alexandra06 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh I love this! You've got to keep writing and update soon. All I've got to say is you've got to have someone go in the white padded room, that's just a must *winks* but really you've had Duo talk about Heero but he's not really there, you've really got to fix that...OH I KNOW! you can have Heero go in the padded room. you know just a shuggestion. have i scared you yet? anyways update soon is all i got on here to tell you and look what i wrote! lol
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Title: Title:Optional
Reviewed By: SadisticAngel_Noho [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok I'm here..finally.My computer shut down the first time I tryed..anyways I like the work you put into this.Don't see many involving this idea in them and you did a great job with it.Glad I found it yesterday..if I hadn't, I have missed a good one.I'll keep an eye out for an update..hope its soon..but great job and keep up the good work.Ciao~
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Reviewed By: animeotaku418 (not signed in) On: April 22, 2004 16:46 CDT
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yay you updated again! ^^ i really love this story and it goes so well with the characters! but i have two questions. 1-is heero ever gonna be in the fic? and 2-what is a sociopath? (spelling?) im so uneducated.....heheeheh well update soon! ^^ or feel my wrath!.....not really. toodles! ^^
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a great story. Though, what is Quatre's problem? When does Heero show up? Is Trowa going to be moved to a different facility? Please update soon!
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Title: Sweet story!
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 09:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really charming! I can't wait for Heero to show up, and W's third personality. Your interpretation of the different characters is great! I look forward to reading more. Poor little Q!
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Reviewed By: SweetasStrychnine (not signed in) On: April 22, 2004 07:59 CDT
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wow, i can't believe that more people haven't reviewed. i love your story and totally envy your writing ability. please don't stop!
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Reviewed By: Lord_Koryuu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 02:12 CDT
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Wow, this reminds me A LOT of a similar story by Spooks called "ASYLUM".......
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 11:52 CDT
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Yea!!! two chappys (^_^)!!! Hmmm I dunno if the fact that his father blamed him for his mother's death is the only reason for him being there... I fear they maybe a hint or kinds of abuse besides verbal. And Duo too, with the warning about being alone with trieze, something more may have happen because he changed the subject so quickly. There's has to be more reason for Duo to be there, he's normal to me. So open but closed off at the same time. So I'm sure that what He told Quat about him being there isn't the whole truth. I hope Duo gets some sleep soon or he'll start gettting weak or some other side effects. Hey I caught this in the reading... Ch.5 -Slowly, Duo shook his head, but then hesitated and nodded instead. "I can play the violin." - it should be Quat's name there right? Hope it's helpful. I wish I could hug Quat and Duo and Trowa. GROUP HUG!! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: animeotaku418(not signed in) On: April 14, 2004 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! you updated! ^^ updates are your friend. hehehe that was a good chapter! well update again soon or i will have to send my evil goats to bash you on the head. .....not really..... but please do update again soon! well toodles! ^^
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story...sigh why is every time I come across a good story(like so) it seems that it hasn't been update so often. Well This IS a good story and I'm sure that your readers, including me (^_^) would love it if you continued it. So please continue!
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Reviewed By: animeotaku418 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 01:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude your story rocked! its really original. i've never read a similar one! its pretty funny to! however, it surprises me that heero's not there....i thought of all of them hes the most insane one... lol! well i hope to read your next chapter soon! ^^
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