| "Love at First Sight" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: animedreamer On: July 17, 2004 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG! OMG! I LOVED THAT! I WISH PEOPLE WOULD WRITE MORE ONE-SHOTS LIKE THAT!!! UR DOIN' GREAT KEEP IT UP!!!
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Reviewed By: fungrl515 (just not logged in) On: June 25, 2004 15:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
your story is very entertaining. the thing is, why did you include that little of lime. if you had taken that out, and decreased the rating, i'm sure you would have many more reviewers and readers. i'm happy that you did cut off the lemon (as I really dislike them)though if you cut back even more, it would have been better. over all, it was an enjoyable story. the story idea was cute and it progressed nicely, as it was only a one-shot. very nice job.
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Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 20:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
aww....such fluffy moments...kute story
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Reviewed By: LightandDarkness4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 17:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute ans Really Sweet! I love it!!!!
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 17:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
really sweet!
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Reviewed By: LoupeyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 03:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awww! How sweet!
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 04:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Huh... I'm pretty sure I read this before, and reviewed it, but who's really keeping track. Nice job, I enjoyed it :)
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Reviewed By: Kazu-chan On: April 01, 2004 02:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So sweet and cute! I've not read an Inu/Kag that's like this before. It's just pure and sweet. Keep up the good work. -Kazumi
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Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: Aewi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 03:51 CST
Comment/Review:
This one shot is really sweet like a candy. But why did you cut off the lemon scene? Or am I a pervert? Oh Gott! Anyway, I like it.
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Sandro666 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 14:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SHORT AND SWEET! VERY GOOD!
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 04:13 CST
Comment/Review:
awww that was soooooo cute!! i loved it! keep up the good work. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: inu_obsessed_chic27(nsi) On: March 26, 2004 19:25 CST
Comment/Review:
It was okay , but u didn't put no lemon! U can't rite rite a oneshot wit out a lemon! It just isn't rite! Anywayz, I thought it was very cute even though there was no lemon! lol, wat can I say? I lubb lemons! I dunno how much more to stress dat u needed to include da lemon! I liked it though! U should probably have made a fic wit it starting wit how the 2 hot together or sumthin, it was kinda confusing! Yay! I luv bein da first to review!
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