| "Happier Lesson" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: sephiorth_jtp [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 15:13 CST
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Reviewed By: sephiorth_jtp [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 15:11 CST
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wow i really liked this story plase wright more his is great (*O*)
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Reviewed By: sephiorth_jtp [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 07:10 CST
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very good enjoyed it lol
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Reviewed By: 111111111111 On: November 30, 2004 15:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
What about Yayoi Sanzenin? She never got any sex in this whole story? What gives? It would have made the story much more interesting with Yayoi Sanzenin getting fucked. By the way... the story was great. It needs more sex scenes with Mutsuki and Chitose though. Could you do a lemon for Yayoi Sanzenin with Chitose? If so.. that would be very cool. Can you also do a MutsukixYayoixChitose threesome fic? That would be so great and fun to read!
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Title: OH GOD!!!
Reviewed By: TargosX On: July 16, 2004 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh good God! The horror... you did a great job... too good! It messes with my mind and the mind of everyone else who reads it... I think I may need therapy... Espescialy after that ending... The most interesting part was that reading it felt like watching a really messed up version of the actual show! I didn't think my mind could get any more screwed up than it was... but you proved me wrong... Kudos to you!
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Reviewed By: Melphina_xgp [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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HA HA HA!! What the hell?! I've seen Happy*Lesson before and it has never been like this. I think I'm going to be traumatized for weeks.
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