| "Demon Queen" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Sarabeth On: March 31, 2005 09:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the story so far. No matter what anyone says, you must keep going! You're a great writer! Writer's block happens to everyone at some point in time. It's okay!
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Reviewed By: Sarabeth On: March 31, 2005 09:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the story so far. No matter what anyone says, you must keep going! Your a great writer! Writer's block happens to everyone at some point in time. It's okay!
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Reviewed By: frenchdiamond_1 On: November 29, 2004 09:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
You don't use the proper tenses.It should be the past and such. I dont know this anime but the story really is weird and not very interesting. Anyways I hope you'll do better next time. Bye
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Reviewed By: iceheart3000 On: August 28, 2004 11:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this. You should continue it. Maybe post it on ff.net too^_^
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Title: Lady
Reviewed By: Jinsei On: March 29, 2004 02:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it quite very much. ^-^ And I would really like to see a continue of it.
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