| "Beautiful Dawn -- Revised" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: 01wing On: June 17, 2005 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfict! its awsome please put up the other revised chapters soon. Iv read the original Beautiful Dawn and I thought it was amazing, but i love this one even better! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Nishii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 13:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I never thought i would see this up in the updated list again. I am very glad you have not given up on the series. Also I am hoping this means you will continue and hopefully finish this fic now. I love it unrevised, I love it revised, and I can't wait to see how it ends. Please don't disappear again. Finish this one, it is truly amazing how well you have written it so far, and even without a beta I saw no errors on the latest chapter. Waiting desperatly for more. Nishi Imaidegawa
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Reviewed By: ^-^ On: June 11, 2005 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job!! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: ^-^ On: January 25, 2005 01:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would have to say that I really didn't expect this much to change, but WOW its' really SOOOO much better then before! You have to hurry and update soooon!!!!
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Reviewed By: himitsu kunoichi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man when you said that you were changing the fic you weren't kidding... I really did enjoy the first version of BD i must admit it is one of my favorite fan fictions and i always hoped you would finish it. I was rather disappointed when you said you we're going to stop writing it to edit it again. But i didn't realize you meant to entirly re write it ^^ I do enjoy this version very much and i'm glad that you're making your fic the way you think it needs to be. I understand that sometimes when you write you find better ideas to play around with. I do it all the time as well ^^ Anyway good luck with the new Beautiful Dawn. I hope to see it's ending. Keep up the good work. There aren't enough good 6x1 fics out there. By the way i love the way you characterized both Heero and Millardo. I wish you well. Thanks for the fic -Bek
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Reviewed By: Jyothi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 02:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hi I really liked the original version of ur story and i have no idea how but i missed the revised version till now. i came across it by mistake and let me tell u it is really good. all the changes which have been made are for the better. i like that you have potrayed Zechs a little more gentle and i absolutely loved the coffee scene. i also loved the scene at the shop where heero meets treize and wufei. keep up the good work. update soon!
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Title: Aww!
Reviewed By: Echo-chan On: July 14, 2004 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luff it but you should definately finish!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 13:18 CDT
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I had worried when you mentioned that you were revising the story because I enjoyed the original so much (although I never read the entire thing - did you ever finish it?) However, what I've read so far has been remarkable and I think I like it even more than the first. As you had intended, I already sense more tenderness from Milliardo and the way Heero is fighting his feelings is very promising. I love the way you introduced him to Treize and Wufei! I think Wufei will end up being a true friend to Heero and a wonderful ambassador for Milliardo's attempts to woo Heero. It'll be interesting to see how Wufei handles his friendship when/if Duo comes back into the picture. One thing that I've come across in some of the Treize/Gundam Pilot Milliardo/Gundam Pilot fics and I hope you won't do is drag out the "I'm not worthy of this person's love because I'm not on the same level..." theme. Obviously it'll be a barrier, but hopefully one that's overcome after a couple of hurdles and not brought up every other chapter. (Just MHO) Great job so far kiddo!
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Reviewed By: OtosuHanyou101 On: May 29, 2004 09:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv this story! It rocks! My reason for giving some 9's is that U HAVEN'T FINISHED! I want to see cute little Heero and dominant Zechs form a relationship, and SOON! They are gonna b such a cute couple! N E way, besides that little glitch, I luv ur story! keep it going, hun! CHICKENS!>>love that signiture closing y'all!
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Reviewed By: Clair On: April 16, 2004 18:51 CDT
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Plz update it was just getting good. Plz plz update. I really enjoyed this fic it was well written and very cute yet still kind of angesty. The story idea is refreshing to i have never read a fic quiet like it. So please please update!!! *begs on knees*
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: April 13, 2004 11:12 CDT
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That's excellent, maybe a different color but equal of good and ejoyable. Congratulations.
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Reviewed By: siti On: April 12, 2004 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
continue soon please..
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Title: Beautiful Dawn..
Reviewed By: Ita-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 07:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woww,..this revise version of BD is much better than the previous ones,...keep-up the good work and hope you could continue soon. \/^_~\/
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Title: Erm..
Reviewed By: Procyon On: March 27, 2004 11:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow..just wow, it's excellent...I never expected you to remake the entire thing...but hot damn...WOW! I absolutly cannot wait for more of it to come out. My writing is far below this, and your fics have inspired me to write two of my fics.
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: March 27, 2004 00:30 CST
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At last, where you be? Well, I enjoyed the old fic a lot, and I don't mind read it againg. It's fantastic. I hope enjoy more chapters soon. Congratulations.
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