| "Beautiful Dawn -- Revised" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sweet Dream On: December 31, 2006 15:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!! T-T please update sooon!!!
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Title: [utter silence]
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [Not Signed In] On: April 14, 2006 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pray tell me how you think to get reviews if you leave your audience utterly speechless with awe? UPDATE!
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Title: Utter Silence
Reviewed By: Kalico [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 13:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
....(crickets chirp)....this was heartfelt my friend. Plz save Heero. i still feel that J is holding him down. Shake the parasite loose plz. (grins evilly). to me it seems that Heero has a cloud of doubt and guilt all around him even when he is happy and with Zechs. I hope something happens to change the situation...so that Heero can be more free and happier. so he won't feel so bad being happy and living his life with some level of unparalelled normalcy. no matter how happy you make Zechs make him, that underlying doom and sense of responsibility will always be present in my opinion. Ditch j, or let him die, or let him tell heero that it is oksy...on second thought, just ditch or kill J off plz. this fic is excellent so far. why'd you stop updating? i read this fic ages ago, like last year and you haven't updated. plz do so. and if you have time plz read my fic, God's Will too. it's a G-wing fic under the name Kalico. plz, plz read and review.
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Title: my mistake
Reviewed By: Lady B. On: September 09, 2005 14:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
I read what I wrote and was like crap.. I don't like spelling.. I meant some don't like to write.. oi vay, but I absolutely love your story.
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Reviewed By: Lady Blaizen On: September 09, 2005 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just keep in mind that some of your fans do like to write reviews even though they love your story
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Title: beautiful dawn
Reviewed By: lo On: August 27, 2005 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story. I like the tension between the characters that you have created. I like the fact that there is a plot,the story moves along nicely, and it is hot. I can't wait to see more from this, and more stories from you. I like the way you write.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very touching. At first I felt sorry for J and now that I have a hunch that it might be his fault that Heero is the way he is, I can't have any sympathy for him. I only hope that what he did can be reversed. Oh, what did Duo do to Milliardo? He must've did something bad if he's not considered a friend.
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Reviewed By: 01wing On: June 17, 2005 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfict! its awsome please put up the other revised chapters soon. Iv read the original Beautiful Dawn and I thought it was amazing, but i love this one even better! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Nishii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 13:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I never thought i would see this up in the updated list again. I am very glad you have not given up on the series. Also I am hoping this means you will continue and hopefully finish this fic now. I love it unrevised, I love it revised, and I can't wait to see how it ends. Please don't disappear again. Finish this one, it is truly amazing how well you have written it so far, and even without a beta I saw no errors on the latest chapter. Waiting desperatly for more. Nishi Imaidegawa
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Reviewed By: ^-^ On: June 11, 2005 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job!! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: ^-^ On: January 25, 2005 01:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would have to say that I really didn't expect this much to change, but WOW its' really SOOOO much better then before! You have to hurry and update soooon!!!!
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Reviewed By: himitsu kunoichi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man when you said that you were changing the fic you weren't kidding... I really did enjoy the first version of BD i must admit it is one of my favorite fan fictions and i always hoped you would finish it. I was rather disappointed when you said you we're going to stop writing it to edit it again. But i didn't realize you meant to entirly re write it ^^ I do enjoy this version very much and i'm glad that you're making your fic the way you think it needs to be. I understand that sometimes when you write you find better ideas to play around with. I do it all the time as well ^^ Anyway good luck with the new Beautiful Dawn. I hope to see it's ending. Keep up the good work. There aren't enough good 6x1 fics out there. By the way i love the way you characterized both Heero and Millardo. I wish you well. Thanks for the fic -Bek
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Reviewed By: Jyothi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 02:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi I really liked the original version of ur story and i have no idea how but i missed the revised version till now. i came across it by mistake and let me tell u it is really good. all the changes which have been made are for the better. i like that you have potrayed Zechs a little more gentle and i absolutely loved the coffee scene. i also loved the scene at the shop where heero meets treize and wufei. keep up the good work. update soon!
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Title: Aww!
Reviewed By: Echo-chan On: July 14, 2004 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luff it but you should definately finish!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 13:18 CDT
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I had worried when you mentioned that you were revising the story because I enjoyed the original so much (although I never read the entire thing - did you ever finish it?) However, what I've read so far has been remarkable and I think I like it even more than the first. As you had intended, I already sense more tenderness from Milliardo and the way Heero is fighting his feelings is very promising. I love the way you introduced him to Treize and Wufei! I think Wufei will end up being a true friend to Heero and a wonderful ambassador for Milliardo's attempts to woo Heero. It'll be interesting to see how Wufei handles his friendship when/if Duo comes back into the picture. One thing that I've come across in some of the Treize/Gundam Pilot Milliardo/Gundam Pilot fics and I hope you won't do is drag out the "I'm not worthy of this person's love because I'm not on the same level..." theme. Obviously it'll be a barrier, but hopefully one that's overcome after a couple of hurdles and not brought up every other chapter. (Just MHO) Great job so far kiddo!
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