| "The Spirit Detective Show Version 2" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mimiko7 On: April 05, 2004 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the chapter. Next one use a bazooka. Oh! And a machine gun! *pulls out a machine gun* I JUST SAW SCARFACE!! =^^= Say 'ello to my little friend! *accidentally hits automatic* AW CRAP! O.O *hides behind a rock* DAMMIT!! >.<
Mimiko (the lover of Jin)
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Reviewed By: Mimiko7 On: April 05, 2004 01:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! another chapter! ^^ And a funny one too! And you added Shido! Whoo hoo! Don't forget update soon! Mimiko (the lover of Jin)
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Title: Shuichi's Angel
Reviewed By: Shuichi's Angel On: April 04, 2004 19:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey! y was i being stabbed...? that *cries* isnt *cries* ni-*cries*-ce...lol juss playing well n e ways...please update soon! i cant wait to see wut u will think of next! ~Kurama's Angel (a.k.a: Shuichi's Angel, Angel)
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Title: ahahah
Reviewed By: yukichan66 On: April 04, 2004 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahah funny!! but wait... why was i first to die?! you shall feel my wrath!! you fool!!... i enjoyed it though... (when i was in it) ::cough::
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Reviewed By: Miyakai On: April 04, 2004 11:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok..I'm better now, I talked to Youko and he said that I'm like a cockroach. Whatever that means. Something about "You can squish it over and over and over and it still won't die." YAY! I can't die! So I didn't die I went into a 'meditative trans'. *laughs maniacly* Oh. And Allie is officially un-damned. *lol* Yes, yes, I'm sorry Allie. I had a 'Kiya' episode. (Kiya's my best friend. She likes to 'damn' everyone and everything in sight) So...next chapter soon! YOU MUST WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON OR ELSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *eye twitchs* Where the hell did that come from?? *shakes head* I'm losing it.
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Title: Official 'dunno...' girl and annoyer of Karasu
Reviewed By: Miyakai On: April 04, 2004 11:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oi!! I GOT KILLED!! AND KARASU DIDN'T AVENGE ME!! *wails then hides in a corner and begins to cry* Why me??????????? Damn you Allie and your stupid knife and your stupid Night Breed thing whatever the hell it is. *sighs then stands up* Ok, I'm better now. It was...interesting...I GOT KILLED!! Wait...is that possible? I didn't know I could get killed. Hm...lemme go ask Youko. He would know, he's tried enough times...Mwahahaha...
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Reviewed By: Allie-kit On: April 04, 2004 08:52 CDT
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YAY! I got to stab people! >^_^< Can I have a flamethrower next? ONEGAI! And a grenade launcher! I NEED a grenade launcher! *laughs maniacally before falling over* ^@.@^ Itai.... Hiei...Karasu...tasukete...? ~Allie-kit~
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Reviewed By: Mimiko (the lover of Jin) On: April 01, 2004 13:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! Haha can't haha stop haha LAUGHING!! Whoo! Damn M-chan you're good! Please god update soon! I just gotta read more of this story! Ja ne! ^.~ Mimiko (the lover Jin)
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Title: Shuichi's Angel
Reviewed By: Kuramas Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv ur fics!!!! im so happy i get to be in ur fic!!! im so so so special! i hope my shuichi sweetie will be in the fic soon! i cant wait for an update! and dont take a month again! lol ~Shuichi's Angel (a.k.a Kurama's Angel, Michelle, and Angel)
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Reviewed By: Allie-kit On: March 28, 2004 11:08 CST
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>O.O< You sprayed me with a hose, you...you...am I allowed to swear on here? Hn. ...RANDOM THOUGHT! Karasu should blow up the random-appearing homework bugs too! They crawl into your ears and make you incapable of intelligent thought! Then you have to do your...I lost my train of thought. What was I saying? Oh well. I WANT MY KNIFE BACK! *searches for the audience member she killed, clearing a path of psychophobes along the way* ~Allie-kit~
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Title: You stole my penguins!
Reviewed By: Your daughter On: March 27, 2004 19:01 CST
Comment/Review:
you stole my penguins you hobo on a stick! ::hits you with a llama:: M-chan: @_@ Muahahaha, you are actually right, I would play in the puddles ^^. Im still sueing you for copy right on those penguins Ja! ~*Rookie*~
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Title: yukichan6
Reviewed By: yukichan6 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry i just realized i messed up!
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Reviewed By: yukichan6 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eheheheh.. i liked it...!!! but yknow.. i'm not a total... kuronue freak,, i like youko to!!! ehheheehhe!! you did a reallly good job of acting of me..!!! but''' i'm waaaayyyy more sarcastic!
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Reviewed By: pillows' On: March 27, 2004 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eheheheh.. i liked it...!!! but yknow.. i'm not a total... kuronue freak,, i like youko to!!! ehheheehhe!! you did a reallly good job of acting of me..!!! but''' i'm waaaayyyy more sarcastic!
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Reviewed By: pillows' On: March 27, 2004 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eheheheh.. i liked it...!!! but yknow.. i'm not a total... kuronue freak,, i like youko to!!! ehheheehhe!! you did a reallly good job of acting of me..!!! but''' i'm waaaayyyy more sarcastic!
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