"The Spirit Detective Show Version 2" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: PyschoFire_Wolfxx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 16:43 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: omg this is hilarious i was dying of laughter and at the fact that my friend tama has issues with reading outloud...anyways continue! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Mel-chan8 On: June 21, 2005 04:46 CDT Comment/Review: "I'M NOT LITTLE! I'M COMPACT!!" I'm short so I'm gonna remember that one hee..Very funny. I'm not sure what nightbreed is so that made me get a little lost but I enjoyed it anyway good Job!
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Reviewed By: sakurasango On: April 12, 2004 21:42 CDT Comment/Review: *doubled over laughin* Me 'n my bro Alex (he's 6) love this one...alex loved it when u kept gettin stabbed over 'n over again...update soon again....*goes back to laughin*
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Reviewed By: Mimiko7 On: April 10, 2004 03:20 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I just read all that reviews and only me and people in the fic have reviewed. >.< People what is your @#$%ing problem?! You should be writing reviews to M-chan!! Not just the cast and myself!! Damn some people I swear! *crazy laughter* *polishing her machine gun and many other piles of weapons behind her* Heh heh heh... Mimiko (the lover of Jin)
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Reviewed By: Itsukami Urokum (i'm not logged in) On: April 07, 2004 14:25 CDT Comment/Review: Hiyah once again! this was awsome! um, what happened to "The Spirit Detective Show" verson one? well, anyways, good ficcy. ALLIE-KIT, YOU HOBO, YOU STOLE MY NAME!!! (My nick name's Allie, too!)
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Reviewed By: Mimiko7 On: April 05, 2004 01:22 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I loved the chapter. Next one use a bazooka. Oh! And a machine gun! *pulls out a machine gun* I JUST SAW SCARFACE!! =^^= Say 'ello to my little friend! *accidentally hits automatic* AW CRAP! O.O *hides behind a rock* DAMMIT!! >.<
Mimiko (the lover of Jin)
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Reviewed By: Mimiko7 On: April 05, 2004 01:16 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Yay! another chapter! ^^ And a funny one too! And you added Shido! Whoo hoo! Don't forget update soon! Mimiko (the lover of Jin)
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Title: Shuichi's Angel Reviewed By: Shuichi's Angel On: April 04, 2004 19:15 CDT Comment/Review: Hey! y was i being stabbed...? that *cries* isnt *cries* ni-*cries*-ce...lol juss playing well n e ways...please update soon! i cant wait to see wut u will think of next! ~Kurama's Angel (a.k.a: Shuichi's Angel, Angel)
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Title: ahahah Reviewed By: yukichan66 On: April 04, 2004 14:08 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: hahahah funny!! but wait... why was i first to die?! you shall feel my wrath!! you fool!!... i enjoyed it though... (when i was in it) ::cough::
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Reviewed By: Miyakai On: April 04, 2004 11:40 CDT Comment/Review: Ok..I'm better now, I talked to Youko and he said that I'm like a cockroach. Whatever that means. Something about "You can squish it over and over and over and it still won't die." YAY! I can't die! So I didn't die I went into a 'meditative trans'. *laughs maniacly* Oh. And Allie is officially un-damned. *lol* Yes, yes, I'm sorry Allie. I had a 'Kiya' episode. (Kiya's my best friend. She likes to 'damn' everyone and everything in sight) So...next chapter soon! YOU MUST WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON OR ELSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *eye twitchs* Where the hell did that come from?? *shakes head* I'm losing it.
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Title: Official 'dunno...' girl and annoyer of Karasu Reviewed By: Miyakai On: April 04, 2004 11:31 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oi!! I GOT KILLED!! AND KARASU DIDN'T AVENGE ME!! *wails then hides in a corner and begins to cry* Why me??????????? Damn you Allie and your stupid knife and your stupid Night Breed thing whatever the hell it is. *sighs then stands up* Ok, I'm better now. It was...interesting...I GOT KILLED!! Wait...is that possible? I didn't know I could get killed. Hm...lemme go ask Youko. He would know, he's tried enough times...Mwahahaha...
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Reviewed By: Allie-kit On: April 04, 2004 08:52 CDT Comment/Review: YAY! I got to stab people! >^_^< Can I have a flamethrower next? ONEGAI! And a grenade launcher! I NEED a grenade launcher! *laughs maniacally before falling over* ^@.@^ Itai.... Hiei...Karasu...tasukete...? ~Allie-kit~
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Reviewed By: Mimiko (the lover of Jin) On: April 01, 2004 13:34 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! Haha can't haha stop haha LAUGHING!! Whoo! Damn M-chan you're good! Please god update soon! I just gotta read more of this story! Ja ne! ^.~ Mimiko (the lover Jin)
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Title: Shuichi's Angel Reviewed By: Kuramas Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 21:17 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i luv ur fics!!!! im so happy i get to be in ur fic!!! im so so so special! i hope my shuichi sweetie will be in the fic soon! i cant wait for an update! and dont take a month again! lol ~Shuichi's Angel (a.k.a Kurama's Angel, Michelle, and Angel)
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Reviewed By: Allie-kit On: March 28, 2004 11:08 CST Comment/Review: >O.O< You sprayed me with a hose, you...you...am I allowed to swear on here? Hn. ...RANDOM THOUGHT! Karasu should blow up the random-appearing homework bugs too! They crawl into your ears and make you incapable of intelligent thought! Then you have to do your...I lost my train of thought. What was I saying? Oh well. I WANT MY KNIFE BACK! *searches for the audience member she killed, clearing a path of psychophobes along the way* ~Allie-kit~
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