Reviewed By: myinupapa10 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 02:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cute!! that was a wonderful one-shot story... but you should write stories with a little more length, and your spelling wasnt perfect. i also feel you didnt get into the characters well enough. the ending was...basically what everyone was waiting for(including myself) but it was sort of..how you say..cliche. i decided to give you an overall 10 for 10. great story ^-^ but i think you shouldve payed more attension to your english teacher..anyway i look foward to any other fanfics you might be posting. and you chose perfect pairings..beastboy and raven! keep that pairing in mind..and robin/starfire..they really belong together dont they...but remember to give cyborg a mate as well or prepared to be accused of being a rasist!(i recomend cyborg and jinx he did after all have a crush on her)remember that the best way to get the character's personality right is to live a day as they would...except for the fighting vilians thing. ok im gonna shut up now bye bye!
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