| "The Unexpected Gift of Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Mermaid Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 23:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey you need too continue this story bacase its pretty good and i want to see what happens next "pppppppplllllllleeeeeeesssseeeeee" *makes cute face*
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Reviewed By: Sulecca On: June 03, 2004 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!!!!! I think you rewritten the last chapter right if so PLEASE write the next. Keep up the WONDERFUL work and UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Cereza On: May 04, 2004 11:15 CDT
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Okay, the beguinning of your story was awesome. I loved it, that's why it made it to my favorites list. But for some reason, the last chapter you've done, I don't know, I think it seems too rushed. I understand that Kagome is OOC, but that's because this is a fanfiction. But maybe you should reread it and maybe you'll see what I mean. I'm really not trying to sound mean, if I come out sounding that way, I am sorry. It's really a good story and it has a good plot.
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Reviewed By: angelypoo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 09:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story so far! I hope that you update it more! It's very well put together, and the plot is interesting!
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Reviewed By: nonno On: April 12, 2004 10:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
really good fanfic. plz update soon
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Reviewed By: DemiGoddess On: April 03, 2004 23:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great i can not wait for the next chapter your faithful reader, DemiGoddess
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Reviewed By: ajanasha On: March 29, 2004 18:30 CST
Comment/Review:
pretty good, update soon! ^___^
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Title: Sugoi!
Reviewed By: Stormy Nights Rainy Days [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 15:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Kool I luv this pairing and this plot hahaha wonder whats gonna happen next ne! Update soon!
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Title: lil_angel
Reviewed By: lil_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 00:47 CST
Comment/Review:
I've read many stories similar to the one you're writing. In my opinion, you should continue and try to be more creative to capture more readers. Good Luck and Great story so far ^_^ Just hope my story goes someway, too. Later!
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