| "A Matter of Good Sense -- Revised" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: silentnight On: November 15, 2004 09:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am so glad you continued with this fic. i read the original and was sad when you decided to discontinue and rewrite. i have been pleasantly surprised. keep it up.
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Title: Good revisions, now . . .
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More, please? *g*
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Reviewed By: Kagero13 On: November 14, 2004 16:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad to see this fic continued! It's very interesting, I can't wait to see what happens next. Thank you for writing it!
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Reviewed By: liliana On: August 22, 2004 09:50 CDT
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please keep the 2 versions on line !!
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Reviewed By: Godrat On: August 21, 2004 16:41 CDT
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I'm glad to see a new chapter up. to be honest I'd thought you've lost intrest in continuing it. I'm very glad to be proven wrong.
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Title: Thanks heaven!
Reviewed By: Godrat On: June 02, 2004 12:17 CDT
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Oh thanks heavens and all kinds of gods for the black fonts.(sighs happily)
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Title: Font color
Reviewed By: Godrat On: May 31, 2004 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic a lot but not the font color, it makes my eyes tear. So each time, I have to change the font color in the html source befor reading it. it would be really nice if you could use a more eye frindly font color.
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Reviewed By: Majnoon On: May 29, 2004 04:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reading it was fun. I also checked the old version of it but this one is something else. more mature and logical I guess. I hope to see more of this lovly fic really soon.
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Reviewed By: Sminty On: May 26, 2004 20:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh how I love this fic. I NEED more. It sooo orginial and cute. I love your Wufei. I'm nervous for him. I started to read the old one, but... I decided to stick with the newer and improved verstion. Keep up with the good work. I'll be reading...we'll when mm.org lets me find it. I seem to be having trouble getting the updats. Nevertheless, I was oh so happy to see this new chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really fun AU! Hope you'll give us more very soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Ice blue kitty On: May 09, 2004 06:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like how you've changed it and hope you finsh your new version edition soon. I can't wait to see how it comes out and I'm craving for the rest of the story .
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Reviewed By: shima On: May 02, 2004 02:44 CDT
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Hmmm. much better then the last rev. but it's time for an update or we'll forgot what happened so far!
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Reviewed By: Sahel On: April 15, 2004 17:42 CDT
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I like your latest Revision. hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Nora (Not the one from MMorg) On: March 31, 2004 13:09 CST
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starts well enough. Now to see what comes next,
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Reviewed By: Cephalanthus [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 23:29 CST
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I am impressed! I was sucked in by this story in its original form, and the revised version is even better. Your wording is clearer, your characters have gained a greater sense of individuality and personality, the emotions come through with a bit more vividness... in general, the story seems sharper, tighter, easier to read and still very entertaining. I can't wait to read the rest of the revisions, and the continuation of the story!
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