| "A Matter of Good Sense -- Revised" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: Duchesscarml [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 13:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this!! It's very interesting... I have to know if Treiz and Wufei are going to make it?? God, I hope they do!!! Please update soon! The storyline is so original and seems so well thought out... I hope you keep writing it. ~Duchess~
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Title: Good, but . . .
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 09:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following this story from the start and really like it, but it seems you've gotten bogged down with the central relationship. The angst and tension have been good, but now it seems to be the same old thing over and over again. Please, progress!
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Reviewed By: bb On: October 30, 2006 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Interesting development... I wonder what those shadows are? Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: sglily - nli On: October 30, 2006 15:31 CST
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I really like this story! And since you have updated it/revised it, it would seem that you have not given up on this fiction - which is a good thing! I am interested in finding out just what talents have lain dormant within Wufei as well as what special gifts "Trey" has. I love the love/hate relationship you have developed between the two main characters. I also wonder how you will eventually bring them together to see eye-to-eye. Great story and hope to see many more updates!
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Reviewed By: Akennea On: October 28, 2006 21:06 CDT
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Ummmm... Should we expect another revision every time you post a new chapter? Very good story, keep it up, and please... let's go furthur with it? it doesn't have to be perfect, this is fanfiction not novel writing....
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Title: Whoops
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [Not Signed In] On: April 14, 2006 14:27 CDT
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I actually read this awhile ago (you still haven't updated!) and I love it. I should have known it was 5x13 but until the last coupla chapters I thought it was 5xOC... Yeah I'm not that smart (alack!) but this is good...and not...updated...please update! This is a good story. Feel free to insert a purr in there somewhere.
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Reviewed By: lo On: March 27, 2006 21:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are soooooo good. I love your writing, and I really love this story. The character development is wonderful, I love where the story is going, and your story telling technique is great. I hope to see more from you in the near future. Till then keep up the great work. oh you spoil me with your writing. great work!!!!
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 23:53 CST
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I want you to know something before I write all I want to say...In the 9th chapter before you tell us that Trey is actually Triez, you actually call Trey Triez. When I first read it, I laughed my head off. And then I got to the next chapter and was like....oooohhhh.... This is an interesting story, and I am hoping that you'll keep writing. I am loving this whole thing with Wufei, and it is fun to see him go through all these changes, and yet sad to see that he punishes himself and Triez. He really did have a bad childhood even though Quatre and their father tried to make him happy. People can be so cruel at times. I like the teasing tidbits of the DuoxHeero. It would be a great side story because I know I am not the only fan positively drooling over the way you write those two. I am hoping for a little more background on the religion of Wufei's people aswell. I recall several mentions of a Maxwell, yet none of them actually Duo. It is weird because when I hear 'Maxwell' I think of Duo. But that might just be me. I hope this has a happy ending, and I am eager to see how this story ends. Ja!
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Reviewed By: Kourutusunie (not logged in) On: March 26, 2006 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Stupid mediaminer didn't put up my whole post! I also didnt realize (or remember) you were here on mediaminer. When sweetlysour closed I just kinda sat there like..."Shit". Anywho!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kourutusunie (not logged in) On: March 26, 2006 22:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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YAY!!!! U updated! I didnt know when you would ever update.
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Reviewed By: imalive [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 16:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you, I just wanted to let you know that. Yeah I am a big fan of your work but this fic is my favorite of all. It makes me cry, it makes me mad, I just love the emotion you convey it's crazy the way you can do that, and with Wufei none the less. I adore that boy and you only make me want to build an alter to him more and more. Sorry for the weirdness but I'm really excited about this update. It lives!!
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Reviewed By: A.j aka MangaChild420 On: March 25, 2006 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still love it and i can't get enough!!!
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Title: hello??
Reviewed By: chantygal [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 00:36 CST
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soooo what's going on? don't tell me you've dropped this beautiful story? don't let life get in the way of your writing. you have a good thing going here. Keep writing .Keep updating. I know you have several chapters in you :)
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Title: Update plz
Reviewed By: Kalico [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 13:55 CST
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i've waited patiently. Plz update soon. plz, plz, plz. you are killing me. it's so unfair for ppl to write such beautiful fics then stop. you haven't died right?
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Title: More More!
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 13:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely adore this story! I hope you will continue it soon! The characterizations are great and I love the slow but sure way Wufei is coming to realize his own true nature. Can't wait to see what you do next. Hugs!
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