| "Passage through Shadow 4 - Memento Mori" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: Heekun On: May 13, 2004 18:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Argh! I think I know who that girl is...! I think you told me, but I can't recall the name.... Anyways, loved it, update it when you can~
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Reviewed By: Fan-fiction-lover On: May 09, 2004 06:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, but you need to update more. I like what's happening.
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: Shatterstorm On: May 07, 2004 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent use of Stratigey, politics and foreshadowing in this chapter. This as to be one of the best chapters yet. I also like how "Jun" reacts before going back to sleep. hehehe
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Title: Chap 1
Reviewed By: Heekun On: April 01, 2004 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*Gasp* Micheal was the first child of vegence(or however it's spelt)?! ...Oh, right, you told me that before.... Can't wait for the next one
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Shatter-Storm On: March 28, 2004 10:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gOOD UPDATE, HOPEFULLY YOU'LL RE-ADD THAT SCENE WITH MORE FORSHADOWING
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