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"Spiral" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]
 Reviewed By: Theresa  On: July 03, 2004 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Excellent. Kudos.
 Title: Scoff
Reviewed By: Comic Book Guy  On: April 01, 2004 17:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Uh...this story sounds a lot like Episode-21 of Weiss Kreuz Gluhen. You theif! You didn't think of all those sexy things yourself. All the touching and carresing, all seduction and addiction to sex. I knew it was a little too good to be by someone named Pagoda. I'm telling! Lord Gackt, JK.
 Title: Pre-review
Reviewed By: Talyssa [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 31, 2004 05:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Ooookay so i haven't actually gotten around to reading this yet, its saved to my hd and i'm going to take it upstairs and read it before bed, but your authors note in chpt 2 set off little warning bells in my head. So my advice to you is this: Don't FORCE a plot, really. Figure out what your main purpose was in writing it (characterization, smut, etc) and go for that. there are plenty of fanfics out there that have all manner of missions, failed, succeeded, whatever. You don't HAVE to have one to write a good story, sometimes the good stories are the ones that don't. On the other hand if you've already got your heart set on some plot, go for it. I just wanted to point out that you don't need to try and play to your readers that much, if you just do what you want to do it'll be fine. (and I promise to write a real review once I actually read it)

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