| "The Locker" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 15:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good! You've established your characters so well, and the tension and mystery is great! I really don't know quite what to think of Heero yet. Nice job! More soon, I hope!
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Title: Dude !?
Reviewed By: narutofan11 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 10:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE! This is soooo not right! You started this in 2004 and made one update in 2005!.......I sooo want to read more of this. I hope you check on this from time to time and see it is still being read. End my suffering and write some more on this....PLEASE! I am begging you. If one person enjoys it isn\'t that good. Well you know there are at least 7 people who do like your story and despretly want to read the rest of it. So please update it soon. bye : )
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Title: ch7
Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 03:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome stuff! The eerieness just builds and builds and builds. The imagery of the river was perfect and the vulnerability of the cabins just adds to the feeling. Same thing happens to our cabin; jail escapees break in and live for weeks in the cellar; you go out to visit and you know something's wrong because all the tinned food is gone and the guns are missing. One summer, a gang of thugs walked up the river and stole the guns and the spirits, and sat on the riverbank getting drunk and taking potshots at the police, who were called out to get them. In the end, my 70 year old father-in-law had to go down and talk them into coming up, because the poor, long-suffering coppers really didn't want to know. But, back to your great story, as well as the development of the atmosphere, you are still building a great dynamic between Heero and Duo; it really sizzles. Heero's interest is evident, and sweet, and Duo's nervousness and distrust is palpable. I do hope that you will keep going with this story. It is a really great effort and I have enjoyed it very much, thus far. And I would say that it could very easily translate to a great original story with all original characters, if you chose. Great work. (Will that get me more?! ^_^)
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 02:02 CST
Comment/Review:
You will write more. It's freaky and disturbing and cool and riveting, therefore you are unable to drop this fic. You must see it to the end, please please!! Okay, well, yes, update as soon as life permits. Thank you for writing this! ^_^
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Reviewed By: AyatheWaterDemon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 13:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it a lot!! A psychic/paranoid/modd swinging Duo is very amusing!!
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Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 06:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great. Heero and Duo have a really nice dynamic. Can't wait for the next bit.^^
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Title: ^.~
Reviewed By: shevaleon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really love this story. It's great & very creative. I just hope you won't just sit there & continue it soon. It's kinda sad to leave it unfinished. Don't start writing if not gonna do it to the end!!! And, please, make it NC-17 - it's a waste to not use allyour skills & I know you're pretty good at it. Best Wishes, XD
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 11:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
All I can think to say is...wow...this is really good. I so can't wait for an update. Oh, look at that, I made a rhyme and I didn't even mean to. LOL
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