| "A Simple Kiss" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: magna-carta
Reviewed By: magna-carta [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O-O, my god, thats briliant!!!! you really good, and have made a very loyal fan, tis briliant!! i said that but hey ^^ keep writing, i'll the rest asap
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Reviewed By: Turin me On: November 14, 2004 20:02 CST
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Hiya! This is the first time I've read a fic of yours. It was great. I'm really not rah-rah for Gokou/Sanzo pairings (I think Gokou is too 'young' but yours managed to change my mind. You made me smile like this: ^_________________^ Sankyuu!!!
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Reviewed By: call me goddess On: June 22, 2004 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD Dude, I didn't know Gojyo cared... lol, Want some fruit? XDXDXD
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Reviewed By: Vidalark [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 03:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this fic for awhile and I'm really enjoying it. Do keep up the good work. I also know of Fake, got all of the TokyoPop mangas and the anime!
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Title: Great Fic!
Reviewed By: Vidalark [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 00:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this fic and can't wait to see what happenes next. I love how you are making this growing relationship between Sanzo and Goku go nice and slow but not to slowly hehehe.
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Reviewed By: YohjiBabe2008 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great. COntinue to write. I love your style of writing. Please continue!!!
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Title: loved your fic
Reviewed By: Ran chan On: May 15, 2004 04:09 CDT
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I loved your fic.. i cant wait till the next chapter... please keep wriring. i look forward to reading the rest of the story. :)
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Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 21:39 CDT
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Che! I can't believe you only have three reviews!! *shakes fist at readers* What the hell is wrong with you people? I've only recently discovered Saiyuki(last week, in fact)and I've already read most of the Saiyuki fics here. I must say yours is one of my favs. Please continue, I'm looking forward to seeing Goku continue to mature, and Sanzo to give in to his feelings.
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Reviewed By: Jan B. On: April 28, 2004 19:44 CDT
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Oh myyyyyy....I have just read the first 8 Chapters of "A Simple Kiss". Your story is just amazing...there is just so many wonderful things going on that I don't know where to start. The interrelationships between the four guys is so totally believable. Goyjo is perfectly in character as the big brother giveing advice and guidance/understanding to Goku. The characterizations are right on as far as I am concerned...so Sanzo may seem a little OOC...this is the first time he has found himself in a relationship of this type that he wants with all his heart, yet is unsure about. It is nice to see Sanzo a little off kilter...love does that to you. The writing is so well done...it just grabs your attention and won't let go! I read all 8 chapters at one setting...Yayy!!!!Gosh, gosh...so many, many good things...Goku learning to manipulate his Ki is good...the camraderie of Hakkai and Goyjo is good (two wonderful friends who know each other almost as well as an "old married couple"); Sanzo fearful of losing anyone close to him, again; Goku's gentle love and warmth that Sanzo now misses at night...GOD! THERE ARE SO MANY WONDERFUL THINGS I CAN'T NAME THEM ALLLLL...!!!!!!!! Thank you for a truly wonderful story... Can't wait for the next installment!!!!
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Reviewed By: kitsune-oni On: April 27, 2004 08:03 CDT
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This story is amazing. I love the way you developed their relationship, I find it very realistic. And "As his sleep addled mind cleared, he realized that it was the very warm, very naked body of Sanzo that he was snuggled against." really cracked me up!! :) Looking forward to Goku and Sanzo making up (and making out, heheh). I wish Sanzo would stop making so many problems for himself and just stay with Goku. Though somehow, it seems strange that he'd let Goku touch him in public... dunno why.
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Title: a little sap never hurt no one
Reviewed By: Oosaru-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 10:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it, hey it keeps me awake. Since no one else wrote anything I figured I would. I like it, although I am not so sure if it's totally believeable. But who cares, right? It's your story, it's written well. And heck, if it captured my limited attention, it must be good!! ;)
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