| "I Promise You Freedom" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Tiy On: January 09, 2005 02:25 CST
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This is a wonderful fic. I have read the previous one, and have just finished what is written of this. Very nicely done! I am begging, pleading... Take mercy on me and continue writing! I love your ideas and want to see what happens next. I noticed you haven't updated in such a long time. *puppy dog eyes* Update /now./
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Reviewed By: winnie On: October 16, 2004 23:39 CDT
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i like your story but you haven't updated in a very, VERY long time. i am mad that you killed Michael. i love him and you killed him. could you somehow have him alive? like all along the head corters had him and just used him for his hacking skills? i would really like that.
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Reviewed By: Scittaru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 18:16 CDT
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I'm happy now.Inari is fine so I won't torch you.But if the rest of the story is about Kosaka,I will!Otherwise it's pretty awesome!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: inuchoyu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an awesome fanfic it just.....well...needs a little more work but still good. please try to read mine. They are, Goodbye my love(Chobits), The three show battle(Yuyu hakusho, sailor moon, Inuyasha), The new girl(Yuyu hakusho), A diary for two (Inuyasha) and my new one is things anime characters would never say. So thankz!
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Reviewed By: Scittaru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 12:54 CST
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Ok,I just now read the second chapter and I'm getting really ticked off.You killed 2 out of 3 of my favorite characters and made the other one sound crazy.Please don't do anything to Inari!If you do I'll torch you!
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Reviewed By: Scittaru On: March 30, 2004 15:33 CST
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I just have two words for you:LONGER PLEASE!
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