| "Look Who's Back" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: stix On: September 11, 2005 15:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
i loved this story. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: TGB On: October 24, 2004 07:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
You had way too many grammar mistakes. There were fragment sentences everywhere!
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Reviewed By: Maya2.0 On: June 13, 2004 11:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it alot, so please update it soon. Thank You! And if you have writer's block than let me make a sugestion. Try putting in something where Karasu turns Kurama into a girl and almost rapes her, but instead Heie makes her pregnent. I've always wanted to read one like that! Thank You!
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