| "Dante's Prayer" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: I'm Reading It On: September 23, 2004 19:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like your story, but Inuyasha is not a demon in Japanese (akuma); he is of 'youkai' heritage, which is sometimes translated to English as demon, but can also be translated as ghost, magical creature, etc. Official Inuyasha publications use the Japanese words 'youkai' and 'hanyou' in reference to what Inuyasha is. I know it's picky but I don't like the English translation that Viz came up with (demon) and most translators now just leave the word 'youkai' and don't even bother to try and translate it to English. Thanks and please update soon.
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Title: Dante's Prayer
Reviewed By: demon inuyasha lover On: September 22, 2004 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG! Exciting and I hate cliffhangers! What will happen in the morning hhmm? will he go back to full youkai? Will he go back to his hanyou self? update soon!
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 16:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really can't wait for the next capter! I hope you update soon! Although I usually see "Youkai" used for demon in Japanese.
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Reviewed By: rachelbean On: March 31, 2004 11:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am IMPATIENTLy awaiting the next chapter. GREAT beginning. cliff hanger
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