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Reviewed By: KrystiCEED [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2004 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...hi. if you ever get the time to read this review, (i doubt it very much) i would like to know... who 'mimiru' is. Ja! (call me, you should know my name from my.. sreen name.)
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Title: 4 gods sake !!!!
Reviewed By: saphira_draco [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 02:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
god its horibble(not the fic-.-),it terrible its its-!karu-kuns review!!!!run 4 ur lives!!!!if u dont like,u dont read cos this is one firery dragon!!!!ur outta ya leage!!!her story rocks ass!!!ur going down that 'i know all' path.her story,her choice and y'know u could have seriosly hurt her fellings!!!she not a 3yr old or push around!i hope ur review is deleted!!!!!!!!!puha
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Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 13:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, forget Karu-kun. I HAVE been raped before, and this story IS good. Karu, you take things FAAAARR too seriously, even if Akito was a girl at the end of the manga, it's fan FICTION for a reason, you twit. Hey, at least Savay isn't having Akito act like spiderman, that's pushing fiction to an extreme. *cringes at the thought of Akito in spandex* The horror... And, on one last note Karu-CHAN, why don't you get an account on mm.org and say it to her face? What's wrong, can't take a taste of your own medicine?! - Alright, that's enough of my anger rant, but remember flamers who think they're going to insult people's fics: I eat you people for BREAKFAST (and lunch 9.9 lol). Lol, nice half of a chapter Savay. Now if you could only get the second half up... (it's a 7 because I never give any Mary Sue's higher scores than 8s. I have been pushed away from Sues and into yaoi, Sav...v.v)
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Title: spot on!!
Reviewed By: saphira_draco [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 23:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that karu person is just sad, your story rocks!!wats with all this 'not a plot device''n' stuff its just a story a real cool ass one right more plz!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Yarisha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY! Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee update it'sso funny. And awww the love is cut. *Giggle* update update upadte update soon! update update update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Karu-kun On: August 22, 2004 23:02 CDT
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There's something you need to know. Rape is not a plot device. Especially when you have never been raped! You ought to be ashamed, you insensitive twit, for writing out of your own ignorance. And on top of that, this is a Mary Sue fic. The combination of all of these things makes this story truly disasterous. Please stop now before it's too late. Oh, and Akito is a woman, so that would make your character a lesbian. If you don't believe me, then just wait until the manga volume 15 or 16 comes out in English.
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Reviewed By: elleven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*tackle hugs save* LMAO That is so me! keep writing, i know where you live.
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Title: Do you know what rape really means?
Reviewed By: Mary Sue Plot and Sue Criticizer On: August 22, 2004 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, this is an okay story. But the plot device of being raped by her cousin, please, there are things that you need to have your character deal with after being raped. She would fear being even near men or boys. I highly suggest that you go to your favorite search engine and type in Rape and read what Rape is like. Rape is violence against women or men if the rapist is a man or a woman. Yes, women can be rapists too. Please if you want to have some realism in your story concerning the rape of your female character, please rewrite this story dealing with the rape and it's aftereffects - meaning she would probably become pregnant.
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Reviewed By: Shiugre [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great work I can't wait to read more!!! YAH!
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Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By: RW (again ;p) On: May 22, 2004 10:28 CDT
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yeah, Shiugre has a point. Did you know if people push u to update and u dun do it for yourself, u get writer's block? That's y I'm taking a niiiiccce long break. But it still doesn't explain the deal with drawing Kakashi...-_-;;; yay, i was the 20th reviewer! ;p good going Savay! *still feels special that u created ur pen name after my nickname 4 u* heh heh...^^;;Back to drawing Kakashi! XD
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Reviewed By: RW (May-VeggieGirl1 u know) On: May 22, 2004 10:23 CDT
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T_T;;; Hn. V_V I already said what I thought about the self insertion and my opinion about Fruits Basket. Eh, oh well. Would u like a stick on a stick? It'll cost ya' $45! lol, yup a new inside joke. I should write the next chapter of Realm of CHAOS while Amber's computer is still broken. Hey maybe u should show Krysti this fic. Knowing her, she'd like it. Well, that's all. v.v
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Reviewed By: whitchhunterR On: May 20, 2004 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great so far and i cant wait for more and i also am glad that mimiru was pput in
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Reviewed By: SaVaY [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 14:12 CDT
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ack...i can't freaking read til i review
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Reviewed By: author (SaVaY) On: May 03, 2004 14:14 CDT
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damnit, i can't read if i don't post
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