Title: Good Start
Reviewed By: Ldypebsaby [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great beginning for a fanfic. I really like the idea, I LOVE Sailor Moon and Yu Yu, try to up date as much as possible I think. Oh and one last tid bit of advice there are weird O's with lines on them what are those? Good JOB!!! I can't wait to read more!!! Love Ldypebsaby
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