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Reviewed By: NaVaJo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2009 03:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story hope you haven't forgot about it...hope you wrote more. You should really think about putting it on adultfanfiction.net or fanfiction.net you would more than likely get a bigger fan base.
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Reviewed By: Dominic Shade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2005 19:04 CST
Comment/Review:
Omg, I absolutely love this story!!! It's so funny and cute! And of course mad hot with all the yaoi sex, lol. Please update quickly!
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Reviewed By: StarHoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 12:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best mpreg fic I've ever seen. Please please keep writing? I'll umm uhmmmm I don't know what but please more.
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Reviewed By: rayven2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 11:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good, can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: halfbreed saiyan goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 03:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very interesting read. Don't be discouraged from the lack of reviews, you have to be patient. Keep up the good work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: lee-lee On: June 01, 2004 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the new chapters they were great please update soon!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: WingSong On: May 30, 2004 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHH Please please please continue!!!!! I love this story!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! [could it be lemony;)]
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Reviewed By: WingSong On: May 23, 2004 01:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a good plot! Cute and sweet and also interesting. I can't wait to see the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: lee-lee On: April 26, 2004 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story so far. please update soon.
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