| "love that ya can't see!" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: kagomeinuyashafan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it hurry up and keep writing
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Title: suggestions
Reviewed By: Nagasaki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have two suggestions..1) space out the conversations 2)and space out the paragraphs...that makes them seem longer and when you space out the conversations you can read them better. all in all your story was great so far and i can't wait until your next chapter!
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