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| "Hero" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Sangos Reencarnation [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 02:20 CST
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So... can I kill you now? That's my favorite song in all the universe and you just INSULTED it. 'Hero' it supossed to be for a Ranma/Akane or any other nice, heroic couple, not for pervert pigboy who trapped someone with magic 'cause he can get a girlfriend of his own =P Well written, anyhow.
| Title: Thanx
Reviewed By: Saberwulfe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 11:02 CDT
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LOL, well met good cousin. Thine scan and conference sweeten mine ears and emplore me to witness mine foolish error. This humble fruit of mine brain was truly forged with due haste and as thus, most assuradely bears much folly. I beg of you, perchance you shouldst spy such an inconsistancy, ransome it none of thy scrutiny and I shalt smooth the pock-marked road. I thank thee, and bid thee good morning. -Dianna
| Title: EDIT Psycological Warfare
Reviewed By: Lord Aries Greymon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 00:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
The bit of poetry at the end is not really what I meant
| Title: Psycological Warfare
Reviewed By: Lord Aries Greymon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
By the Gods! I do believe That I have lost this psycological war. I concede to thee, thine superior use of talent, strategy, and reader empathy, have cost me this war. As I read this one-shot, even though I have never seen the Anime, I somehow agree. This is how the episode should have ended. "And as I walk through the Valley of the Shadow of Death, I take a look at my life, and realize, that there is indeed something to look forward to." "However, I have been Depressed and Unstable for so long that, even The Lord Almighty claims that my sould has died long ago." "Untill the next we meet, I bid thee, adieu." Sincerely, Lord Aries Greymon PS: Thou somehow managed to forget the "I's" in the song segments. 'Twas supposed to be "I can be your hero baby,"
| Title: ok kat
Reviewed By: Li Ryoyami On: April 02, 2004 13:44 CST
Comment/Review:
If that's how you think it should....lol, seriously though, that is a good songfic, but doesn't the song go "I can be your hero baby?"
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