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| "The Strength of the Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Lain of the Azure Sky (mm member) On: September 12, 2004 00:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
I must say, I don't really admire Pokemon as much as I used to anymore, but I have to be give credit where credit is due. Your storyline is incredible, and stunningly put together. I can tell you put a great deal of effort into this, and for that I genuinely thank you ^^. Good job, and if you have any other fanfiction in your repertoire, I fully encourage you to post it everywhere you can, so you can get a wide selection of feedback. :3
| Reviewed By: Tears Of A Fallen Angel On: May 14, 2004 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...Wow... just... wow. Your ending was just to sad! Your whole story is just to sad!! But nonetheless I'm your biggest fan and love your story too MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The good thing about you story was that everyone who had been controlled was free. Ash, Misty, Reijiro, Gary, Brock. Everyone. Your ending was so sad!!! Too sad and I cried all the way. I spend about a week trying to finish this story- reading, I mean- without any innteruptions. Well... I love LOVE your story... so... *tears fall* sad... *wipes away tears*... CONTINUE!!!
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