| "Hwoarang's Sister" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
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Reviewed By: kasumi fan911 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 23:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Plz update soon ya've got everyone who's read it curious and i so wanna now what happens ta Hworang's lil sister so plz update
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Title: AHHHHH!!
Reviewed By: Mint CHocolate On: April 24, 2005 09:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! NIGHTMARE COMING TRUE!!!!! Hide me! *Hides behind Brother* Anyways update!!!
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Title: .......................UPADTE!!
Reviewed By: Kana On: August 17, 2004 11:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh-oh!! The nightmare might come true! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! This can't be happening!! ........................................................................... ... UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: morninglight [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 10:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your story is good and original, however, the chapters are too short to be called chapters. More lengthy ones would be nice. Your story is sometimes hard to read and also the description is good but you don't need to say dingdong or crash for doors or lightning, you can use direct speech. Include more interesting things and try to add more suspense or anything to make it a more enjoyable read. I'm waiting for your next chapter! ^^
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Title: Cool!
Reviewed By: Miss Fox On: August 10, 2004 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic sweetie!! Don't listen to Orlando 18 I luv this fic!! This is what I have to say about orlando 18: Screw you!! Please update!!
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Title: Awww
Reviewed By: Kana On: August 03, 2004 14:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think Hwoarang really loves his sister! Awww! update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update updateUpdate update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update updateUpdate update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update Update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update Update update updat |
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