| "Sole Survivors" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: May 21, 2005 21:14 EDT
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Just out of interest, does mirai Trunks have a tail already, or will it grow back later?
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Reviewed By: aredhel On: May 20, 2005 05:37 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh mon Dieu!! Update quick coz i can't wait to read the next chapter!! This story is so well writen!!
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Reviewed By: Heiress2thethrone [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 17:37 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my GOSH! What a cliff-hanger?! I should be mad but I'm just so excited to read the next chapter! Can't wait to find out what happens in the next installment! Great work!
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: April 26, 2005 21:11 EDT
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COOL UPDATE!!! Great to see you liked my idea of the "dying during childbirth as a cover-up" in your story. I can't wait to see Vegeta question his father on that one.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 21:22 EDT
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Ah! What a pleasant surprise! I hadn't expected a new chapter from you until summer vacation! And what an interesting plot surprise! This was so well-written and terribly exciting. I always go nuts when Baby Trunks is in peril but I love revolutions. As always, the King/Prince dynamic is really interesting. I'll wait patiently for the next update!
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: March 25, 2005 19:24 EST
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When describing Cereza's features as 'more an athlete than a woman', did Serena Willams come to mind when you wrote that, cause with the way she dresses she looks like she's got four medicine balls shoved down her clothes.
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Reviewed By: QueenSaiyajin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 21:59 EST
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If anyone can tell me why chapter 13 keeps losing its formatting, please email me. The file itself is saved with paragraphs, and you can see it correctly on my website, geocities.com/vegetabulmaromance QS
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: March 05, 2005 18:15 EST
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How come there's no paragraphs in this update, were you trying to save space or something?
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Reviewed By: VegetasLindaLou On: February 23, 2005 16:17 EST
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Ok I finished what you have, please update, I hate to be left hanging. It is so good. thanks
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Reviewed By: VegetasLindaLou On: February 22, 2005 18:49 EST
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I love your story. I just finished chapter 8 and had to stop to say I't Great!!! I love the long chapters, and the story line is so well... It' super! I will as you now to please update, even though I have a way to go becouse at the rate i am reading, I will be at the end soon. :(
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 12:41 EST
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wow, a nice long update. Interesting bit about the slave girls and Veg rejecting his culture and the "sole survivors" echo. I liked the words "F**K Saiyan culture" surprising even himself. The lemon wasn't too much (as if there *is* such a thing! LOL!) but very romantic and luxurious. The style is just right all through this--deft touches of humor and snazzy dialogue.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: February 19, 2005 21:29 EST
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I'm seriously thinking that this woman codenamed MOTHER, could actually be Vegeta's mother whose still alive, and the whole 'died during childbirth' thing might have been a cover-up because she wanted to raise the prince differently to how the king wanted to.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: February 18, 2005 22:54 EST
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Great update, can't wait for the party scene.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 11:03 EST
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FINALLY got to this chapter! I couldn't get through my browser (grrrrr). First lemme say that I understand teacher schedules but slow updates are fine when the chapters are this long and this entertaining. *sigh of relief over baby Trunks' return* And I loved the drunk Kakarot! Your dialogue is nice and snazzy throughout. I really am going to read this again! And I know you'll be faithful finishing the story, so no hurry, no pressure--just a big thanks for reviving the baby!!
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: November 28, 2004 18:37 EST
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Great to see an update and is there any chance you could be able to rectify the problem to get to your website.
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