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Title: "Sole Survivors
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 12:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i had tears in my eyes reading this chapter...oh how much vegeta has grown throw out this story is amazing.and i know theres more to come...(and yes it did take you long)but you made up for it...great great chapter.....maria
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Reviewed By: carrie, queen of solitaire On: August 13, 2004 09:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv your story! originality! characterization! a plot that makes sense! and the lemons aren't forced! this is definately one-of-a-kind and I hope that you pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease update soon! I have been following it all the way from ff.n and I can't wait to find out the ending! Even if the story got a little freaky for a moment. I may be going overboard here but I really did cry during chapter ten. thank you for listening to my ramblings! ^_^
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Reviewed By: carrie, queen of solitaire On: August 13, 2004 09:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv your story! originality! characterization! a plot that makes sense! and the lemons aren't forced! this is definately one-of-a-kind and I hope that you pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease update soon! I have been following it all the way from ff.n and I can't wait to find out the ending! Even if the story got a little freaky for a moment. I may be going overboard here but I really did cry during chapter ten. thank you for listening to my ramblings! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Serendy4evr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 20:31 EDT
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What a bad cliffy QS! *sniff, sniff* Vegeta can't possibly stay there for the rest of his life! I don't know, but if he can't trust anyone can't maybe Pota be the one to wish chibi back? Just a thought... another wonderful chapter to a gr8 fic, keep up the good work! p.s. glad I found you in this site 'cuz I didn't even remember your hp. It's all good now though, cuz I've read the next installment of SS!
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Reviewed By: Satans Widdle Hellper [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 16:57 EDT
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This is good. Update soon.
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Title: wow, nice long chapter!
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 14:16 EDT
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Sweet lemon, very lovely stuff. I'm enjoying the Vegeta-Mirai Trunks dynamic too. This was a satisfying chapter. The mere mention of Mirai Bulma usually brings tears to my eyes so that was a nice set-up to the intense reconcilliation scene with out favorite couple.
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Reviewed By: roxychica091 On: July 26, 2004 09:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am soooo glade you put this up here! I've been reading it mostly on your web page and this is on of my fav. fics... great story!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 23:03 EDT
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hi! I was following this one on Forever and finally got around to gobbling up the last few chapters! I hope your ff.net (grumble, grumble--they kick off all the best writers--consider it a badge of honor!) readers find you here or find your website. This story is so original in that it does away with the sexual tensions that are the staple of B/V's and has the two, together, deeply and romantically together, from the very start--and nonetheless there's an exciting plot to follow! I have a weakness for the Mirai story--and your scene with Vegeta and the hologram of Mirai Bulma brought tears to my eyes. The lemons are lovingly tender, the relationship is sweeter than in other A/U's but the grandeur and high adventure is still there. I'm going to have fun reading about V going to the other timeline! You need more reviews here--update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (don't you hate it when readers bug you like that?) debbiechan
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 23:26 EDT
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Update!!! The story is good. I like it alot and I'm looking forward to more political machinations. I hit the end and went, "Shit, there's no more." The only thing I had a problem with is that Vegeta went through all 4 transformations in a year. Was that really necessary?
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: July 04, 2004 23:22 EDT
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it'll be interesting to see what happens next and the trip through time to kill King Kold.
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Reviewed By: Geta Girl 247 On: June 03, 2004 10:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good story. I like the originality. Keep up the good work and keep the chappies flowing.
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Reviewed By: Mystical Mayhem On: June 03, 2004 08:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading this fic on another site, but it wasn't completely posted. I'm SOO glad I found it posted here as well. I think it's a great story and one of my favourite... I suppose you could call it a "genre" of the B/V pairing ^_~ Good job!
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Reviewed By: CCFLEURSDELYS On: June 02, 2004 21:15 EDT
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HOPE THAT TIME MY REVIEW WILL PASS my mail adress carinne.descours@free.fr
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Title: sole survivors
Reviewed By: ccfleursdelys On: June 02, 2004 21:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i find your story amazing! i'm sorry, i reviewed your story but for some mysterious reason it didn't record or something like that or maybe it was on another site with the same story but i'm totally positive about this so maybe i'm not the only one i'm rather confident about this because your story is truly breathtaking i'll make sure to spread words about your talent! please could you notice me when you update or if you have any other story? UPDATE ASAP
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Reviewed By: GoldFusion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 23:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe no one has reviewed this here. It's a pretty damn interesting read I'll tell you that. You've managed to sort of stay with the original DBZ story but then stray off into your own string of events all at the same time. This is great and I know that some people might think that you have Vegeta way too sentimental but I think that your characterization of him is not far from his true nature. He's a very complex person and despite what a lot of fans think, he does feel lovey dovey emotions but he just doesn't like or care to express them publicly. I think that the only time he would do that is privately which is what you have done here. Btw, I am so loving these long chapters. Great work!
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