| "Requiem Knight" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: You're probably getting sick of hearing from me, but oh well.
Reviewed By: Rally Cheyenne [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't listen to who ever wrote that bad review. I think you're story is a great one.
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Title: Oh boy were you right
Reviewed By: Ajundum On: February 05, 2005 16:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh boy you were right. Your fics do suck. For crying out loud. They suck ass. You have no originality or talent.
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Reviewed By: devildice708 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 13:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good. I like to learn from skilled writers such as yourself and combine them into my own. This is one of the best fanfics I've read at Mediaminer yet. Keep doing what're you doing.
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Title: Ask and ye shall receive ;o)
Reviewed By: desolation (misseuropalemsipdrinker@hotmail.com) [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 18:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey. I've only read the first chapter so far (RL being a tad hectic at the moment), but will let you know what I think of the others once I get time to read them. Since I don't know this fandom at all, I can't comment on characterisation, but your style's readable and effective and your plot intiguing. The one suggestion I would make is cutting down on the *direct* description a little -- since this is a plot rather than a mood piece, it occasionally seems a little disconnected and interrupts the flow of your otherwise impeccable writing. Oh, and a "****" or similar between scenes would be a good idea, just so readers know when the scene/POV has changed :o). Other than that, great stuff, and hopefully I'll get to read the rest of it soon...
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