| "Seducing love" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 08:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love it!!! that was great!!! but i think sess should end up with no one!! he is a player!!! wanting both sisters is a big no no!!! it would be so evil if he ended up with no one!! which is y i like it so much!!! but that is ur decision not mine!! so update and never forget the love!! there is just so much of the love!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and the grammar has gotten much better!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
u need to work on grammar and spellin as well but it is still good! i like it and the kurama/boton/hiei triangle is very interestin. u should keep up the good work! much love!!
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is different then what i am used to but i like! i was great! much love much much love! never forget the love! we all need more love!
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