| "Given In" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: jo On: November 04, 2004 23:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gasp!! please write another chapter!!! it's so sad because sasuke is supposed to be able to trust is kakashi!! but he was once again betrayed by someone who was supposed to protect him!! write another chapter showing how sasuke has to deal with having to interact with kakashi every day and how confused naruto is because sasuke is pushing him away more than ever now!!! or something like that! please!! you don't even have to take my idea!! you can make something up entirely different!! but please write another chapter!! or a sequeal!!!
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Reviewed By: Bishies4passion On: June 23, 2004 06:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was great but i'd like it better with all the makor graphics and stuff anyway Marshmellows acool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: ice-lolli333 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the fact that you left out all the graphic stuff....I think it actually gave it a better feel...not sure what, but I like it. I also think that it was written very well...so sad, too! waaa....ok, all done. yes, good job!
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Title: Given In
Reviewed By: mikikim On: April 24, 2004 21:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its nice but would you include the graphic part please about the rape of sasuke please!?!
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