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Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 07:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Great fic. Funny and hot and clever. I really liked the snappy changes between POV and the characterisation was perfect. Thanks heaps.^^
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Reviewed By: wiket On: April 06, 2004 00:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I just loved that! I literally skipped class just to continue reading your fic. It's so funny and sexy at the same time! Great characterization! I hope you write more Yohji/Aya fic! I want another plot because I'm partial to one-shots and short fics. But I absolutely love the way you write Aya and Yohji! Create more! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease?!?!? >^.^
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Reviewed By: The Shinigami Tenshi On: April 04, 2004 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great. You should keep going though. Tell what happens when they go out, somthing like that. well any way great fic. Thorn///_^
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Reviewed By: Mobb On: April 04, 2004 11:58 CDT
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Why couldn't Yoji self-destruct quietly? I could give him lessons. Brilliant. I loved this fic, a breath of fresh air really. And so full of incredible lines. I'll go read your other stuff now.
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