| "Joey's Little Red Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 84 ] |
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Reviewed By: Love Psycho [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 20:29 CDT
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Well...-grins- I just can't wait for an update! This idea is really cool! The character-gets-turned-into-an-animal thing is one of my favs! And the fact he got turned into Joey's fav duel monster is the best! KaibaJoey cupcakes for you!
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Reviewed By: Tenshi of Light [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 18:14 CDT
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Wow. This is a really freaking awesome story. I love it. Great work. I love the fact that you have Seto as a red-eyes black dragon. It's so cool and totally origional...at least as far as I know. LOL. Still, awesome work. Only one comment....you keep switching from Joey to Jou. Other than that, awesome! Love it. Keep up the awesome work.
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Reviewed By: Sekhamet [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 02:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story even though its not finished cant wait 4 the rest!!! I really want to know what happenes next well gotta go Bastet
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Reviewed By: Kittylyn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 03:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finaly got tired of being a moocher, so I decided to take the time to write a review. I really do like this fic, and how you've written it. It seems like you've put a lot of effort and thought into it, and I always appriciate that. Sadly, I must make a small comment on your grammar, because I am a total freak when it comes to things like that. You haven't done too bad so far, but there are a few things that could be improved. If you need a bata, feel free to e-mail me, and I would be happy to edit. Comment over. I send you best wishes and much inspiration from my hole in the ground, and look forward to reading the next installment in the story. Kittylyn (You wouldn't think that I'm only 15 from my review, would you. I'm a writer and an editor for all the peeps I know and/or go to school with. Tee-hee-hee! ^_^)
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Reviewed By: Iris Sun (so lazy) On: July 02, 2005 14:58 CDT
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Yaye! Updates!! *shnuggles* Love you much!!
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Reviewed By: crystaldream340 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. It's so cute and funny. I love the little animals especially Usagi. She's so cute ^^. Oh and one thing, please finish or at least get the next chapter in soon. If you start being lazy I shall send my evil army of squirrles after you. update soon ^^
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Reviewed By: Yukiko_Angel unlog On: June 30, 2005 12:00 CDT
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Mmm ... I suck at reviewing so I'll say, it's nice you're finally updating it again because I like the plot, and maybe Jou know Mai likes him but he is not acting not to hurt her saying : hey I like someone else !
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 11:16 CDT
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I love this story. I don't think your spelling or grammar are bad at all. I love Usagi she is so funny. Great job on the story.
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Reviewed By: anubiset (too lazy to log in) On: June 30, 2005 11:04 CDT
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Not sure what to say about this chapter. I did love how Seto precieved women, I mean, in his type of situation, there has to be women fawning over him all the time. He is the head of a major coporation, and that brings out the wolves, I mean women, who want a piece of that luxuary. I myself, had that opportunity, however, the guy was a pig, who wants to be with a guy just because of money, not that I wouldn`t like that, I just look beyond what is on the surface. I don`t think a lot of women do, at least those that want to have the money and prestige. I don`t see Jou wanting that, he may be a guy, but some guys do the same thing as women. Jou is too grounded for that. He sees the world, but doesn`t let it change him. I don`t think he is ignorant of Mai, he just doesn`t see her that way.
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Title: *Huggley-Glomp-Of-Doom!*
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(place logged me out!) On: June 28, 2005 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You live!!!!!!! Hey, I'm just glad to see you update. And yes, writer's block r teh sux! Ah, this was a very interesting chapter. It shows a little more of Seto's humane said, and part of Jou's. Good to see Seto agreeing with him. Nice dodge to keep Yami's lips sealed. Most people would have had a whole big convoluted thing where he was out when Mokie came in and then they just keep forgetting to tell him about seto. Yes, so very interesting this way. Anyhow, Good Luck with your writing!
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Reviewed By: anubiset (too lazy to log in) On: June 27, 2005 07:51 CDT
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Don`t you hate that writers` block. I do, I can`t get rid of mine. It won`t go away, until I have no paper or computer and then it all comes together, until I get to the paper or computer, then plitz, gone.
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Reviewed By: animaster_sonja [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 06:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. Just a few questions: Can't D-seto fly or do that energyball-in-mouth attack??? Oh yeah... Keep the Yaoi Mild ok. Y'know, just flirting and that stuff, not the hands-in-places-they-aren't-allowed-in, pls or else I'm Flaming you!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Shacel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN! THIS FICTION'S COOL! PLEASE CONTINUE! UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Loar5 On: April 12, 2005 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing fanfic! Very original too; Please write more! I'd like to see what happens. And please, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Maurelle On: February 27, 2005 14:34 CST
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wonderful story. love it. i like cuddles the best.
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