| "Joey's Little Red Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 84 ] |
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Title: *Huggley-Glomp-Of-Doom!*
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(place logged me out!) On: June 28, 2005 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You live!!!!!!! Hey, I'm just glad to see you update. And yes, writer's block r teh sux! Ah, this was a very interesting chapter. It shows a little more of Seto's humane said, and part of Jou's. Good to see Seto agreeing with him. Nice dodge to keep Yami's lips sealed. Most people would have had a whole big convoluted thing where he was out when Mokie came in and then they just keep forgetting to tell him about seto. Yes, so very interesting this way. Anyhow, Good Luck with your writing!
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Reviewed By: anubiset (too lazy to log in) On: June 27, 2005 07:51 CDT
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Don`t you hate that writers` block. I do, I can`t get rid of mine. It won`t go away, until I have no paper or computer and then it all comes together, until I get to the paper or computer, then plitz, gone.
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Reviewed By: animaster_sonja [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 06:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. Just a few questions: Can't D-seto fly or do that energyball-in-mouth attack??? Oh yeah... Keep the Yaoi Mild ok. Y'know, just flirting and that stuff, not the hands-in-places-they-aren't-allowed-in, pls or else I'm Flaming you!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Shacel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN! THIS FICTION'S COOL! PLEASE CONTINUE! UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Loar5 On: April 12, 2005 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing fanfic! Very original too; Please write more! I'd like to see what happens. And please, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Maurelle On: February 27, 2005 14:34 CST
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wonderful story. love it. i like cuddles the best.
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Reviewed By: Thesenis On: February 07, 2005 19:50 CST
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^_^ This one loves it! Its so cutesy! ^_^ *huggles seto-dragon* This had to happen sometime! Oh yeah, please keep writing this!! *lubbles yaoi*
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Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 13:54 CST
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I can`t wait for more. I know how it goes. I was actually getting something ready for a sequel to Carried Away and got completely sidetracked by my new fic. It can be a pain, not to mention I have several others that I`m working on. I really shouldn`t even be here. I should be working. Don`t tell.
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Title: Weeeee!!
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: February 07, 2005 05:41 CST
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You answered all my little questions and my yami's too! Oh! Thanks for the Yami/Tea/Yugi warning. It's not that I don't like hetero pairings, I've just been reading so much Yaoi lately that I forget I like them. ^.^;;; (I like Tea/Yugi!) But it also helps when the writer doesn't bash any characters. Don't worry, I'm still rooting for you! As for inspiration . . . Why not have Yami sneak off to go talk to some of his Duel Monsters (Dark Magician!) about the medallion? Or if you want, you could have the party end and move on to Jou going home for the night. Just think, Seto's all snuggled up (to keep warm), ready to go to sleep, and then Mai calls Joey to ask if he wants to go out for ice cream the next day. And I for one like the OCs, they make comments and can help to move along the plot. Well, until next chapter, Good Luck! Oh! And your pen name means "Bunny Demon" right?
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Title: *poke!*
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 17:48 CST
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Nothing really, but a poke to see if you're doing well. Hope you come back to this.
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Reviewed By: MysticDarkFairy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 16:15 CDT
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YOU MUST GET OFF YOUR LAZY ASS AND WRITE THIS GOD DAMNED STORY!!!!!! I WANT TO KNOW WANT THE HELL HAPPENS TO SETO AND JOEY!!!!! UPDATE NOW BEFORE I HAVE TO SEND MY EVIL HIKARI ON YOUR ASS!!!!!!!!
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Title: aaaawwwwww . . . . .
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(not logged in) On: August 16, 2004 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like. ^.^ You're right, it's more fun having a confused Seto dragon then an overdone cliché. And the OCs are good, but I'm guessing that Jou's pet is you, an author insert that is. Still I like how you keep hinting at things here and there, Jou's 'friendly' smile to Mai, Seto's thoughts on the businessman that walks into and out of the bathroom, and other things. The only thing I'm going to say is, wouldn't Mokuba be worrying about Seto now? He hasn't called him yet and if there is 1 person Seto keeps his word too it's with Mokie. Oh, and you made it sound like the medallion was absorbed into Seto, but is the chain still wrapped around his wrist? If not is it at least in Jou's bag or apartment? And forget the complainer, it's not your fault they don't know the difference between *pg-13* Shonen-ai and *NC-17* Yaoi. Oh, my yami wants to-- BlackDragonViro: Will there be any Yaoi in this, or is it just all fluffy Shonen-ai? *Hopeful/Evil glint in eyes* HappyDragon: Heel yami! Yeah she's just wondering that. ^_^;;; Well, as long as you keep writing, I'll keep reading.
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: August 15, 2004 19:08 CDT
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Thank you so much for updating! I really liked this chappie. And who in seven he**s would flame this fic?! Sorry you got flamed. That is MEAN!! *growls like a kitsune* Any way keep writing and update soon!! Ja ne!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 20:09 CDT
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Oh wow! A chapter! *hugs* you updated!! Oh I drew a fanart for this fic so if you want to see it email me and i'll try to get my scanner working soon ^^ It's a picture of Jou and Seto as a dragon o.o. I liked this chapter ^^ Yami is so sucking up to Tea it's not even funny hehe. Well at least Seto's enjoying it. Update soon!!!
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Title: Oopsies.
Reviewed By: FallenDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 22:11 CDT
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Hehe. I just did that (and this one) under Siri's SN... she's going to kill me... Um... this is Iris Sun t3h soon to be dead Authoress Youkai. Siri-chan doesn't like pairings, be it OTP or not. >> She'll bite my head off if she finds that...
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