| "Fever" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Veggie_Luva_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 10:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh kami this is such an awsome story! it had so much emotion, and great chemistry between Bulma and Vegeta! i usually like comedy/romance stories between these two, but this was the best by far, even without the comedy! i'm making sure to read the sequl i just heard about by reading the other reviews! ^_~
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Title: THE BEST FIC I'VE READ IN A LOOONG TIME!!!
Reviewed By: ss10009 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was excellent, it had just the right chemistry between bulma and vegeta and it was totally well-written! i am going right now to read the sequel lol. i also visited your (wonderful) website! Funny 'cause I read this just a few days after I watched the Broly movie
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Title: Terrific Story
Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this creative story! I especially liked the interaction between Vegeta and Bulma, and the unrequited feelings between Goku and Bulma. This is an awesome one shot that I enjoy reading over and over again. Terrific job!
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: June 15, 2005 01:45 CDT
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this is a great story... I love it to death you did a wonderful job with it
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: August 03, 2004 05:56 CDT
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Cool story. BTW, everytime I try to log on to your website through this site's link it doesn't work like it did on FF.NET. Think you could get it fixed up?
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72-not logged in On: July 18, 2004 11:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
See, this is what I was talking about when I said that Vegeta COULD tell Bulma he loved her if the story was written just the right way. I loved it; sweet, passionate, emotional. You handled all of Vegeta's complicated relationships with ease. It was a true joy to read!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! Just wanted to drop by and say this has been one of my fave fics for a while (I am trying to correct karma by reviewing stories I didn't review when I was a closet dbz otaku!) I found the whole maelstrom of confusion, the surges of lust and jealousy all very believably done--high drama without anyone being OOC or A/U! Loved your raging Veg! debbiechan
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