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| "Genin" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Reviewed By: Exarikun [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 02:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
yoo. just finished reading 'genin' and i like it very much. i see it's been quite a while since you updated and after reading your 'rant' at the end of chapter 10, i was wondering if you had indeed stopped writing. i hope not, cause i like this fic and would like to see it to completion. so, you're somewhat gearing towards naru/saku eh? it can be a good couple, if the story is solid, which in this case, it is. and now sakura possesses the sharingan too. that's a cool twist. though, from the way you worded their trek back after encountering sasuke, you made it seem like naruto is mad at sakura. but she couldn't really help it, could she? anyway, i hope you didn't stop writing, and that you'll be able to update soon.
| Reviewed By: crackpot On: May 01, 2004 04:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
well its abit of a coincidence if you described the entire team is exactly like this pic :http://66.111.49.71/wallpapers/naruto/naruto_7_800.jpg. Damn. Sakura is real sexy in this pic .:]
| Reviewed By: This is Serena On: April 23, 2004 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you fic!!!!!!! I'm a guessing that Ninja has something to do with a shadow. nin=shadow (that is what I have been told anyway.) My email is tiamats_wolf666@yahoo.com so please tell me if I'm right. I hope this is a Sakura/Naruto fic. Hey a girl can hope right. =^^=
| Title: The Wandering One
Reviewed By: Mr. Nice Guy On: April 23, 2004 09:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis fic is excelent, and although this specific chapter seemed to be...dull... the entire storyline of the fic is quite well done! I feel sorry about the others rushing you so often, however...I can't really blame them. *Yes I was on FF.net but my review function wouldn't work* What was the name translation to Masako Toru? Well gotta go...keep up the good work!
| Title: The Otaku
Reviewed By: Fionn On: April 21, 2004 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good fanfic despite two BIG problems first is that despite his being Konoha's beloved golden boy there is no way in hell he would get off with out even a warning for haveing a scrool with a Jutsu as forbidden and dangerous as the Shijuukaigan Sharingan further more there's no way in HELL a leader of any of the major ninja villages, much less Konoha which is the most compassionate and humaniterian, would PROMOTE a ninja for useing something like the Shijuukaigan Sharingan doubly so if the ninja was a power hungry ass like Sasuke. The second problem is that the Shijuukaigan Sharingan should be a once in a life time thing or be even much harder on the body after the first use then Lee's internal lotus.
| Title: The Youko Sensei
Reviewed By: Kyuubi_no_Kitsune's Sensei On: April 20, 2004 07:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice, your new Naruto is one sweet son-of-a-bitch. I mean he now has a technique that is the evolution of the Forbidden Technique; Kage Bunshin no Jutsu... and that mysterious technique that could be heard all around the village... Your Naruto also seems to really fit how Naruto would seem if he was held back for so long from becoming a Chunin. Sakura's new technique is also something really good, The personality switching Jutsu really adds a whole new diemention to the Pink haired Kounochi. She also has a belivable new personality and scenerio...hell her liking of Naruto was ACTUALLY pulled off damn well, without either shreading either ones personalities and or characters. For Also for once, Haruno Sakura actually seems to be able to kick ass like the rest of the Legendary Team Seven and take some names. Uchiha Sasuke.... your evolution of the last member of the Uchiha clan has made him embrace his darker side it seems. He is no longer the cold and reclusive youth who kinda liked Sakura in his youth... but he's something now of a Robot... hell to forsake everything for revenge.... the Avenger has changed...not nessisarily in a good way. Damn, not many fics have measured to this level, from Bloodlines (No offence to the author) to hell...alot of the ones I read (once again no offence to the authors) You have to post some pictures in the pictures section of how everyone looks.... That new Sakura sounds HOT! *Blushes, then returns to the review* Can't wait for the new chapters! If they are anywhere as exciting as this....hell I dont know what to say!
| Title: Mistress of the Tendou-Saotome School of "Anything Goes"
Reviewed By: Saotome Akane On: April 19, 2004 07:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing, I have never seen something like this; the personalities are belivable, the new moves are justifiable, and scenerio's are also very belivable. Know where I can find a pic of the new outfits of the characters? Cant wait for the next one! -Saotome Akane
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