| "As the Band Plays" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Reviewed By: kwiksilver [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 01:13 CDT
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Hey, its me again! I must say, your story is rather addicting. I'm still not really sure where the plot is...BUT I DON'T CARE!!!! I still love it...could do with out the cussing in every third sentence but that's just my opinion. It just kinda gets distracting. Again, i really like the way you've embelished these characters. They are genuinely lovable. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Lyingeyes911 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
~in tarzan speak~ you write more. me like more. MORE!
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Reviewed By: KitsuneClaw On: May 04, 2004 22:57 CDT
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I want a Sesshoumaru and Kagome pairing.
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Reviewed By: Zero Saotome (ZeroSaotome@msn.com) On: May 04, 2004 22:42 CDT
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Lol! Poor Kagome and Inuyasha, such nosey friends with perverted minds. :shakes head: Anywhoz, the chapters got screwed up. For some reason your new chapter is in front of the last chapter. You might want to fix that... Other than that, I enjoyed this chapter, especially since you don't make Kagome all innocent, you actually give her personality and a normal horny teenager side. :gives you a cookie for that: Also, I really think the way you write the story as well as taping it is a good idea. I should try it... Oops, this is getting long. I'll see you in the next chapter!! ^_^ Please Write More Soon!!!!! Love Ya! Oh! PS- If you find that outfit, I'll kill for it... Lol.
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Reviewed By: SesshyMyMan On: May 04, 2004 22:01 CDT
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I agree with Clueless. InuYasha should stick to his first love, Kikyo. Sesshy should be paired with Kagome, and indeed it is disgusting to pair Rin and Sesshy together, they are like related even though they are really not. So please, I beg you, a Sesshy and Kagome fiction is always the best. So please pair them together in this fiction. Or else, I'll pout. Waa!!!
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Reviewed By: Clueless On: May 04, 2004 21:58 CDT
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I hope this is a Sessho/Kagome pairing. I enjoy reading the pairing. I rather have InuYasha stay with his first love. Rin will always be someone young, like a little girl, sis, daughter to Sessho, so it will be disgusting to even think or read Sessho pairing with Rin. Kagome is indeed the one for Sessho. If only if this was true in the T.V. series.
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Title: SESS/KAGOME
Reviewed By: YOUKAI LOVER On: May 04, 2004 21:56 CDT
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MAKE IT A SESS/KAGOME FICTION. IF NOT I'M NOT READING IT ANYMORE!
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Title: ?!?
Reviewed By: lady le fay [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story soooo much! I really enjoyed the whole 'Kagome's giving Inuyasha a back rub thing and utterly confusing everyone listening outside of the door!' It was perfect! I really like your stories and I am waiting patiently... **nose grows a couple of inches** Please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh(notSIed) On: April 29, 2004 20:09 CDT
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wtf yo!!! everyone is so OCC!!! its kinda creepy but funny...odd but...i dunno its just strange! update soon! ^.^
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya(offline) On: April 28, 2004 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!! INU/KAG!! pretty please!!!????? juss update!!!
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Reviewed By: Zero Saotome On: April 28, 2004 00:07 CDT
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*snickers* The guys are such perverts...as is Nazuna. Lol. Too bad Kagome and Inuyasha didn't go and have that fun everyone thought they had. ^_^; Please write more soon, I'm really loving it.
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Title: see... I said I would put you on my favs and check up on you...
Reviewed By: flamer On: April 27, 2004 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, these last two chapters were MUCH better. I'm still kind of weirded out by the back massage, but the reviewers seemed to enjoy it. Sesshomaru was so much less OOC. I'm so happy for that. Since Kikyo wasn't in these chaps I can't tell if you improved on her or not. Miroku seemed like his ordinary self like in the manga and anime. I could easily picture him doing that grading bit. Kagome still seems a little OOC for my liking, but changing her immediately would make the story appear to change completely. I am happy with the improvement, and I hope that you continue to write more and improve on Inuyasha alternate universes. Since, you do have a good idea (even if it is a tad cliche) and I would like to see you work from that to make interesting twists and complex relationships that will attract the average viewers attention.
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Reviewed By: sesy_youkai On: April 27, 2004 07:11 CDT
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Please add more chapters to this fic because me and some other people are dying to read more!!! update real soon
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Reviewed By: koko lyoko On: April 27, 2004 07:11 CDT
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LOTSA FUN AND IT LEAVES ME HANGING!! AND UPDATE SO I CAN HANG SOME MORE!!! MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: Inu-inu youkai On: April 27, 2004 07:10 CDT
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*sigh* people people PEOPLE!!! dont matter about a Sess/Kag fic or Inu/Kag fic... i like em both.... To author: I extremely love this fic!!! it totally rocks and you really really really REALLY NEED to updat...or else... So i hope you put up a new chapter real soon or i'll swear to get out my machine gun with the 6 mile ammo on you!! ^^ I love your fic!!
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