| "As the Band Plays" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zero Saotome On: April 23, 2004 01:07 CDT
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Awww, Kagome and Inuyasha are so adorable. You actually make me want to see Sesshy and Kagome. o.o; :is a big Sess/Rin \ Inu/Kag fan too: I hope you write more soon, this is getting good. ^_^
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Reviewed By: lady le fay [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY! YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE IT! I LOVE EVERYONE'S BAD-ASS ATTITUDES TOO!!!!
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: flamer On: April 22, 2004 01:39 CDT
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Oh yes, and I vote Inu/Kag all the way. ;)
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Title: Don't take this personally...
Reviewed By: flamer On: April 22, 2004 01:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok. I haven't decided if Sesshomaru is strait, or bi. He seems like both. He is totally OOC, so is Kikyo, so is Miroku... so is Kagome. Has Sesshomaru ever, ever shown any to little sign of affection to Kagome to end up making her drunk and having sex with her? Has Kikyo ever even dreamed of cheating on Inuyasha for the person she hates most of all in the manga/anime Naraku? Just because she helped him doesn't mean she doesn't want him dead. Miroku would never say, "Stop making me look like an ass." Is there any recorded proof that Miroku ever cursed? Really? I could imagine him cursing and such in a really frustrating situation, but it appears as if he has managed it to make it his normal speak. And Kagome... why would Kagome get drunk enough to sleep with Sesshomaru? How old is she supposed to be in this fic anyway? Isn't she still in high school?! That would be under-aged drinking, and a lot of it. I don't want this to discourage you from writing your fic. You have a lot of reviewers who would be clearly upset if you stopped the fic they had taken the time away from their schedule to review for. I just want you to consider your work more carefully. Each fic is a story about characters from the same anime in a new and different situation. Not random characters in a random story who just happened to have the same names of current anime characters. I don't want you to take this personally, but do you want a story with reviewrs that love your fic as if it was a real romance novel, or do you want to end up with reviewers that are just reading your fic for the next possible fluffy moment or lemon? Don't get me wrong, your reviewers now seem like excellent ones, but I know that from experience that they will eventually fade away silently while the next generation of reviewers comes along (judging by how long this fic will be) and it could go either way. I implore you to take more time in plotting out the complexity of your characters relationships and original feelings. I guarentee you that ratings will go up, and I'll still be watching since I will be putting this on my favorites to see how you progress. Also, I find your grammer and style of writting superb. The entire band thing is something that a lot of people do, but I haven't read one in a while. I do hope you continue, but shap up your characters a tad. -flamer
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya(not logged on) On: April 21, 2004 14:38 CDT
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INU/KAG!!! NOT SESS/KAG!! PRETTY PLEASE!!! ILL KEEP BOTHERING YOU IF YOU DUN'T DO IT.!!
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Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2004 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg you've gotta update this very soon!!! i absolutely LOVE your fic! please update sooooooooooooooooooon!!! theres just a few spelling errors but nothing too bad :P be sure to add more Inu/Kag fluff :3 theyre my fave pairing yo!!
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Title: heyy~
Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! *blinks* what's gonna happen!! UPDATE PLEASE!! WITH SUGAR ON TOP!! PRETTY PLEASE!!! COMMON!!!from angela
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Title: !!???!!
Reviewed By: lady le fay [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE!? I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOREEEEVVVVERRRRR!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I LOVE THIS STORY! IT'S IN MY FAVOURITES!
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Reviewed By: SeeKer34 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 21:35 CDT
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I likes so far. Can't wait for your update. Please make it sooner than late!!
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Title: Zero Saotome
Reviewed By: ZeroSaotome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 02:57 CDT
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Oh my gosh, this is such a fucking good fanfic! :wants to help the girls beat the fucking shit out of Kikyo.: I hope Kagome gets to take Inuyasha to the hospital. ^_^ Kawaii! I love her outfit by the way, I want one now. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: *Nagasaki On: April 07, 2004 22:21 CDT
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inu/kag please don't let it be sess/kag....the chapter was great! i can't wait until your next one!
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Reviewed By: Grrr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 20:56 CDT
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hey, loin the story so far, the charicters are awsome & i can't get ehough of sessy! plz update soon!!!!^_____^ peace, Grrr
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 03:16 CDT
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Sesshomaru gay? i'm having a hard time really believing that. He seems to "peppy" *sighs* but how could i have not seen it coming..but Lustfull things for Inu, wow, you said Incest is best, but putting your brother to the test? confusing. well keep up the good work.. kinda creepy, but hey, good work. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: LoupeyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 01:00 CDT
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Fun to read! Thanks for sharing, and please keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: kwiksilver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 19:42 CDT
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hello! i like your story, it's off to a good start, you've done a good job of making the characters likeable. But the plot is really hard to find at this point. Is Yasha's band their rival, cuz i didn't sense much rivalry between the two bands. other than that i really like your story and i'm excited to see where you'll take it.
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